El_Diablo

I have read up to chapter 5 and started 6 I still think the stories concept is interesting. But right now it is very fast paced which could be fine if you are just going at that pace to get to U.A. Cause let’s be honest (unless you are going into great depth for your mc back story then not much happens till U.A.) So if that’s the case that is fine but if not may want to consider going a a little slower of a pace because it is feeling a little rushed. Also may want to look into grammarly? Because I noticed a few issues in grammar (which if English is not your first language is understandable cause English is a very hard language to understand just ask people the difference between there, they’re, and their and see how many native English speakers do not know the answer (the answer is too many it is sad))

Of course all of what I said is what I think and if you feel different that is fine you should write what you feel comfortable to do you could start something else give this fic a hiatus and come back if you think that would help get the creative juices flowing again. I know at least I will keep this fic in library as long as you still are active on this site

Just found the fic. And was about to start it so not sure how the previous chapters are. But the concept of bleach powers in mha is interesting would like for the fic to continue because a lot of bleach power while way more powerful then average quirks. Are interesting and diverse (not including kido and other spells) it would mainly be how you blend the bleach power in mha are the blades visibly does the mc need to have his soul exit body to use the bleach powers so many questions? If no then this can be very interesting and more fair cause otherwise no one will see any attack coming unless you make it where due to quirks the human soul are at a higher level and this see him in soul form but that would open a whole can of worms. But for power level The same could be said for some zampakto the lower seats blades especially (usually only lieutenants and captains have way op zanpaktos) the rest could be possible be countered by some quirks especially some of the very strong quirks but only if they are actually able to see the mc and he does not have to enter soul form to use the powers. But you could also make the two worlds blend into each other but that is a lot more work and you would need to do some serious thinking on how to blend the world and quirks would need to be way stronger since the hollows would enjoy all those juicy souls with possible extra power due to quirks (one for all could be used ad a hint that quirks linked to souls)