Michael_v1

Michael_v1

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Woah! Thanks for visiting my profile. Although you may see some stories here; I'm not really an author; that title is reserved for people who write novels. I'm more of a writer and voracious reader!

2018-03-21 Beigetreten United States
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Michael_v1
Michael_v1
1 years ago
Commented

Asgold, sounds like Assgold. nice overlord reference!

"Asgold is an S-rank necromancer. He's a mercenary hunter, so he isn't affiliated with any guilds. I already let Julian know you are all promoted to an A-rank team. however, you're not allowed to enter dungeons right now and will require constant watch as you're too dangerous." Willace explains.

Darkness into Light

Darkness into Light

Fantasy · Elite_cobra

Michael_v1
Michael_v1
1 years ago
Posted

The magic and fighting scenes are awesome and the characters are great. If you're looking for a good story, this one has got you covered. A little bit rough with the formatting and style at the beginning, but after chapter 5 it's super clean!

Michael_v1
Michael_v1
1 years ago
Commented

I enjoy mispellings, like soilder. Since instead of being an actual soldier, it's a person make of soil who is a guard / soldier. super fantasy, or soilder is a soldier rank.

"So you're with them. Yes, there currently in the village chieftains, but right now, it's located up there it's the biggest building. Feel free to go talk to them but dont cause any trouble." The soilder answers pointing up.

Darkness into Light

Darkness into Light

Fantasy · Elite_cobra

Michael_v1
Michael_v1
1 years ago
Commented

lots of backstory, but curious to see where the story takes our characters.

Michael_v1
Michael_v1
1 years ago
Commented

In hindsight, I could have immediately had the character kill the animal for meat. But the thought of it didn't occur to me and it seemed a bit cruel. Too much dilemma, drama, debate and group dynamic. Also extremely dark for the second chapter. I'm trying to not introduce too much internal drama and conflict unless it's for the plot.

Michael_v1
Michael_v1
1 years ago
Posted

Nice word count, author knows how to write good scenes and unique characters for the protagonists to interact with. There's a good magic system and family dynamic as you can feel it going in a certain direction. Definitely a slow burn as the world is being built, but can't wait to see the adventures the protagonists go on.

Michael_v1
Michael_v1
1 years ago
Posted

I think it's got a good start and good potential. The author definitely has a passion for writing and I hope to see more chapters. I find it quite comfy to read, but that's more a personal preference.

Michael_v1
Michael_v1
2 years ago
Commented

I wonder what part of the continent skellius is on... (。・・)_且~ must near be some sort of underground lair or cave system. Maybe even an earth dragon? thanks for the chapter!

Michael_v1
Michael_v1
2 years ago
Posted

For a first time system novel it's written really well. The system screens are nice and easy to read. It's not a dark themed novel and very similar to various litrpg stories. I think the humor is great and the first 20 chapters definitely have some interesting moments and characters. World building-wise it's still a bit slow. However the pacing is not hurried so you get to take the time to understand the leveling system and information about the enemies before each fight. The title is a pretty good synopsis of the story and it's a very leisurely read.

Michael_v1
Michael_v1
2 years ago
Commented

fun first chapter! looking forward to reading more.

  • Merchant of the Underworld original

    Merchant of the Underworld

    Fantasy MYSTERY

    The Fields of Elysium were progressing quite similarly in the manner of Earth (i.e the living) It's markets were dictated by the paper money and junk that found it's way to the world dimension or plane that the Underworld was located. It's economy ran based on the money printed and created by those still alive, which were strips of paper with specialized ink stains called legacy money. This money held the blessing and the breath found only among the living and was difficult to counterfeit, but not impossible. Other objects of dedication suck as statues, cars, and even spirits of art, craftsmen masterpieces, swords, unfinished paintings, arias, secret messages could be found among the most venerated mansions and mausoleums. In this world all the bonds and promises made above were washed away, severed. Few among the living dared or even could visit. Most souls took it to create a second chance. This wasn't hell or heaven, purgatory or a waiting room, but rather a place to visit and stay. Some choose to stay, some disappeared, both heaven and hell coexisted as all could be found here. Various treasure hunts ensued in search of casinos and lost fortunes. Wandering spirits could be seen as was capable ministers, betrayed generals, scheming businessmen, and black-hearted villains. Ghosts of many pasts from unresolved debts and grudges existed as well. The cries and struggles of the uninspired, thoughtful philosophers and fallen empires helped to add to the chaos that was the netherworld. This was the story I originally wanted to write...however writing is hard. So this is what came out instead.

    8 Chs 1 Sammlungen

  • Suzuki Jirokochi's Story original

    Suzuki Jirokochi's Story

    Anime & Comics COMEDY SLICEOFLIFE REBIRTH

    Warning I am a serial dropper. I write on a whim and am notorious for not finishing stories. I've probably attempted about 5 unfinished ones most of them are uninspired and full of references. My reputation so far is publishing trash with trash ideas. Probably around 40 chapters of uninspired garbage (200,000 characters). With that out of the way, I'll be telling the life story of an OC fanfic character in the Detective Conan universe inspired by crown of thorns, snake disease, proletariot in the conan universe, the infinite mess in conan, and others I'm too lazy to recall. The character is Suzuki Jirokochi and I'll be starting from the very beginning and adding some history to the universe. Definitely not historically or canonically accurate, the case closed franchise is not owned by me. All rights or whatever copyright dictates go to whomever it should go to. This is of the few novels I am semi-interested to write, although I have low motivation and self esteem. Honestly I enjoy good comments, although all trolls are welcome. The internet is full of fascinating characters.

    10 Chs 12 Sammlungen

  • Suzuki Jirokichi's Story original

    Suzuki Jirokichi's Story

    Anime & Comics COMEDY SLICEOFLIFE REBIRTH

    Warning I am a serial dropper. I write on a whim and am notorious for not finishing stories. I've probably attempted about 5 unfinished ones most of them are uninspired and full of references. My reputation so far is publishing trash with trash ideas. Probably around 40 chapters of uninspired garbage (200,000 characters). Had to repost to straighten out a few formating issues, inkstone doesn't really have any tutorials. With that out of the way, I'll be telling the life story of an OC fanfic character in the Detective Conan universe inspired by crown of thorns, snake disease, proletariat in the conan universe, the infinite mess in conan, and others I'm too lazy to recall. The character is Suzuki Jirokochi and I'll be starting from the very beginning and adding some history to the universe. Definitely not historically or canonically accurate, the case closed franchise is not owned by me. All rights or whatever copyright dictates go to whomever it should go to. This is of the few novels I am semi-interested to write, although I have low motivation and self esteem. Honestly I enjoy good comments, although all trolls are welcome. The internet is full of fascinating characters.

    5 Chs 1 Sammlungen

  • Generic School Story original

    Generic School Story

    Others

    Honestly, don't expect me to constantly update this to often as it is a side project of mine. Suggestions are appreciated. This is a fan-fiction of the middle school life of a boy named Marconi. Nothing special, no cultivation, just a regular school story with some cool fictional elements. How many references can you catch? I have approximately 30 within the first 12 chapters.

    27 Chs 31 Sammlungen