I'm sorry but it's the translator haha, English is not my native language and having about ten chapters I can't edit them since I just corrected them and that would reduce my desire to write to a minimum haha, and it's either correct or keep writing, but thanks for the tip I will correct it in the new chapters I am writing.
It was obvious that I would act careful and polite in front of the ancestor, she is over two hundred years old the woman and can take me out in a thousand different ways.
Felicia Hardy MCU
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
I write the backstory I want, if you have constructive criticism to make I listen to you but don't write something like "stop embarrassing yourself" as if you were the wisest person hahaha, if you want to tell me that the backstory is exaggerated that's fine, but putting "stop embarrassing yourself" seems like an excess to me, but surely there are many people who complain a lot and do little hahaha.
My life turned out to be normal until I was 5 years old in which I was kidnapped by an organization of assassins, I was in it until I was 17 years old, they kidnapped me because of my intelligence, I had an IQ of 210 which was unheard of, they forced me to study many science classes and thus be able to develop technology for them, they wanted me to create a body enhancement serum which I told them it would take me 20 years which would give me a lot of time and they believed it, being 5 years old I already had an idea of what they would do to me so while I was developing a super soldier serum for them, I developed several technologies that were useless to me that kept me alive, I also received training from them.
Felicia Hardy MCU
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
Felicia Hardy had the power to change the odds, this power is somewhat unconscious, she can change her luck making for example a pot fall on the head of a man who wants to shoot her or trip a man who was going to hit her, it also affects people who spend a lot of time with her causing them bad luck and accidents, but the powers were not only hers but also her father gave her his and thus made her powers increase and the bad luck caused her parents to die because that is not something a four year old girl can control if even her father could not. also keep in mind that this is kind of an alternate Earth as I'm going to add characters that are not from Marvel or the dates are not exact as I don't have the ability to do the 616 country perfectly but I want to post characters are from there, it mesclar.
"I'm sorry father and mother, if only I had awakened my powers earlier, if only I was stronger you wouldn't be dead now"-Felicia.
Felicia Hardy MCU
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
She awakened her powers when she had not yet revived the memories of her past life, she lived four years and her powers awakened causing the traffic accident where her parents died. Now it is necessary to understand that after the accident a girl who saw her parents die and she survived unharmed would think she did something wrong and that is why being in a state of anguish and very strong emotions, she managed to release her memories that were supposed to be released with the passage of time, and now Felicia has four years of memories with her parents to absorb the anguish caused by their death. You have to understand that the mental state is still confused because you have not spent much time assimilating the memories, because those memories and emotions are yours and no one else's, it's like if you lose your memory and after a year of new experiences you recover them, the year you lived are also your memories and feelings too, because in that year maybe you fell in love or lost a friend, but despite recovering the memories you would also feel the loss or love, I hope you understand what I mean haha.
You could give him magic of art like Rill from Black Cloverc or Sai of Naruto. Good Chapter ✌🏻
English is my second language, so translating from Spanish to English is tricky haha. I will try to improve it over time. Besides I am editing the chapters that did not convince me while I write new ones.
Out of 10 how you merged the worlds, how was the character development, even the harem doesn't feel forced damn that's something that I have a hard time writing like crap not forcing a harem haha, it's one of the best works I read from Marvel and HP congratulations **: Any advice not to force a harem? I'm new to writing haha
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original DC: reborn as Walter Todd Wick
this fanfic will have grammatical errors, I warn you in advance I will try to correct them with time,the story is about a person in DC with some powers I will try not to make him op from the beginning and give him a growth to his powers as to his mind since when he is reborn he has to go through mood swings due to his body age so no matter how old he has been,I hope you like it.6 Chs 168 Sammlungen
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Felicia Hardy MCU
Reborn is what any otaku would dream of but what if you are reborn in Marvel and not as a strong person, but as a person who is weak. shit was my first thought as I took time to digest these memories knowing it was Felicia Hardy the black cat. He only had a choice to strengthen or perish by any disaster in this crazy world. I do not own anything, only the oc if they appear so do not sue me haha. The cover is not mine if the owner wants me to change it let me know, peace haha6 Chs 248 Sammlungen
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In DC as Kate Kane Wayne
My name is Katherine Kane Wayne. And if I'm supposed to be Bruse Wayne's cousin. Wait, am I not the cousin but the sister? This story will be based on both comics and television series. Do not expect everything to happen on exact dates like in comics or TV because it will not be. This is the first time I write so do not kill me with criticism hahaha9 Chs 88 Sammlungen
A mountain cannot have two tigers jajaja ✌🏻