He already awakened the Mutated blue silver grass though.
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Book&Literature · Diwas_5100
I only read the beginning of Martial World a long time ago, so I don't know ow much of the rules you stated. But I am glad he is following the Spear path. As many cultivation novels I read follow the Sword path. Your previous one was great start. However, I am looking forward to the updated chapters 😊. Thank you for the chapters so far!
I agree with Goldenstar142. I don't think you should change the MC to being the younger brother of Lin Ming. To be honest, I like what you have so far. I have never read about the Pocket Hunting Dimension other than what was written in a Naruto fanfiction and I feel like what you did in your fanfiction was better. You made it more realistic as you suggested you would do and I think (from what you written so far) what you wrote for the dimension perk is great for your MC's growth development. Especially in getting him prepared for combat, life/death, etc. experiences.
Isn't her name supposed to be Gabrielle?
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Anime & Comics · Tempest_29
When they weren't in a relationship, he kissed her on the lips when she was asleep...
He washed up and climbed into his own bed, reflecting on their relationship. Even though they were officially dating now, Sui wasn't the type to take advantage of someone while they were asleep.
Anime & Comics · IamNoob
Good luck!
Thank you for the chapters!
Thank you for the chapter!
Thank you for the chapter!
Thank you for the chapter!
Pokemon: A different Ash
Anime & Comics · Tempest_29