PointAndFail

PointAndFail

male LV 5

I have ideas but never enough boredom and time to write them.

2018-02-15 Beigetreten Singapore
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PointAndFail
PointAndFail
8 months ago
Commented

I can hear the song in my head now...

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"You can do it too! You can do it too! Let's train muscles, me and you!" Alex finished with a double bicep and a side chest.

MHA: Jaeger

MHA: Jaeger

Anime & Comics · B00BIES_for_life

PointAndFail
PointAndFail
8 months ago
Commented

All I can add to what many people have already said is that you might want to look into Overlord and The Eminence in Shadow. Two animes that show what you can do when you have an overpowered protagonist. (Ok if you dont want to look into them I can give you my take. Have interesting side characters and give them good development. And then just make sure to make fights cool when the MC fights and inevitably wins. Overlord, One Punch Man and The Eminence in Shadows all generally do something along these lines and they are well received. Well it is a lot more nuanced than this but I think most people will be happy with just this)

PointAndFail
PointAndFail
1 years ago
Commented

The pacing is exceptional. Most of the time, sports novels (or fanfics) drag on and on, being very repetitive. It's good that you were unafraid of summarising a lot of matches as they eventually become, "How many different ways can you score/ Someone does something in a match" for a few hundred chapters. There were points in the story where I was confused what was going on (I think it was probably the English) but I could not stop reading. All the free time I had was spent reading until I had reached the final chapter. It really feels like the whole story was planned from beginning to end, which in most cases, makes for a compelling story. You knew the kind of story you wanted to tell and the content for each volume. I kind of wished more stories were like this and less wish fufilment and more realistic. If I had to say what I felt is missing from this story, I really want to know what the Main Character is doing after he retired. What are his children doing? What about the sports clubs he invested in? I cannot help but want to find out what happened there. Anyways, great work! If you do write another story, I will be sure to pick it up.

PointAndFail
PointAndFail
2 years ago
Replied to Asharzal

Maybe ultrasound scan lol

"Her application said Mutation, and she's been invisible since birth," Nezu says. "Perhaps it was wrong, but you'll find out soon enough."

MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)

MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)

Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene

PointAndFail
PointAndFail
2 years ago
Replied to Rafi_Mohd

oh so if he changes it so that his whole body absorbs the essence, his spirit will be his whole body i guess?

Lin Fan was very surprised by his father's Spirit, because these Spirit Bones must have very high potential!

DD: Heavens P

DD: Heavens P

Anime & Comics · Gherman_Sparrow13

PointAndFail
PointAndFail
2 years ago
Commented

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…Yet they can't even defeat the new World Boss yet.

Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

PointAndFail
PointAndFail
3 years ago
Commented

High elimination rate... The Elite 10... Isn't this just Totsuki Academy from Shoukugeki no Souma

"More importantly, the Ten Masters of Mountain and Sea Committee formed by the Ten Masters of Mountain and Sea is a unique executive body directly subordinate to the dean. According to the rank of the 10 seats, they enjoy various varying degrees of privileges, and are even able to influence many things related to the operation of the academy!

Lord of Pets

Lord of Pets

Fantasy · Black Pepper Immortal

PointAndFail
PointAndFail
3 years ago
Replied to Syrose

beetle did not evolve. only learnt a skill

Not to mention that he had already contracted two Gold-rank spirit beasts.

I Let You Manage the Beast Taming Arena, Now Everyone Became Divine Beasts?

I Let You Manage the Beast Taming Arena, Now Everyone Became Divine Beasts?

Fantasy · Iced Cola

PointAndFail
PointAndFail
3 years ago
Commented

One eternity later...

PointAndFail
PointAndFail
3 years ago
Replied to Matthias_Schmidt

From google translate: At this time, in the midst of the harvest, he also has to sigh with emotion.

  He thought about the long way he came to arrive here. 此时的他,在收获满满当中,也有感慨.

All My Beasts are Legendary

All My Beasts are Legendary

Eastern · Da Yu Is Fat Again