writing isn't garbage lets see where this goes
another loser mc who gets his powers and changes his life around. tbh i don't have the Patience to read past chapter 10
garbage story, the writing itself isnt bad but the op everything by chapter 3 makes this go straight into the trashcan
its' a shadow slave copy cat, but with a coat of paint on a non prepared surface. clearly the author isn't half as good. with the writing resorting to boring and overused cliches. However if you enjoy this sites novels you will enjoy this as I assume your brain is the size of a peanut and this is much better than the average shit in this site
thesaurus got overused in this chapter. Were not in the 17 hundreds.
bad transition from narration to action
The beast soared through the air towards Northern, its wicked claws outstretched. Then with a thunder-like sound, another Shin appeared overhead, his sword lancing out in a vicious thrust.
I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
Fantasy · RighteousFilth
Gave it an honest try its just not for me, too much I am built different #edgelord962. Characters are cringe plotpoints have been cringe. Very novice why is it popular? honestly no clue.
I am logging in just to review this novel, Ill be short and concise. This is a great novel that is held back by both the author's ability and inclinations. read up till chapter 3075 1) World building: top tier it is clear that the author put a lot of thought into it as everything is well thought out. Very few novels come to mind that matches the level of detail this has. 2) Action: Again top tier, the descriptions are decent and the creativity of the author is quite good. 3)Story: Sci fy opera epic. This is lord of the rings level story building if you're reading this. 4)Character: the author biggest fault lies here. A couple of things are clear, 1 the author rarely talks with women or has had a relationship with women. 2 the author has few to no friends. 3 the author has toxic relationships as his close friends. 4 the author has massive self esteem issues Honestly the interactions are just bad if we assume this novel is a realistic attempt and is therefore no over fantasizing relationships etc. Then to be blunt its masculinsing women into men as well as having a very light veil of misandry throught the entire novel. If we do the opposite and its only done so for the laughs, then it fails miserably and is done at the expense of the readers patience. Even if we ignore the gender issues the author seems to be conflicted about, every relationship is more of a trade rather than a friendship, to which while in real life in order to have a relationship a trade needs to exist. The over enfasis of the trade shows a lack of social skills by the author. In conclusion, this novel is an amazong novel that is held back by the self esteem issues and struggled the author seems to have with his real life relstionships. If your a guy with a sense of self respect this novel will make you uncomfortable so I would not recomend it. If you are a women as long as your okay with no real feminine influence in this novel you should be fine if not more than welcomed into it.
this is how you know the authors a virgin, the only way he can describe sexy women is woth big tits big ass and nice curves.
She had long, flowing black hair braided down to her ass, and her body was... distracting, to say the least. Curves in all the right places. Small face but big bust. Slim waist but big ass. All in all a killer. Her maid uniform clung to her figure, and honestly, I wondered if it even counted as a uniform. The blouse barely covered her bust, leaving most of her breasts on display. The skirt was scandalously short—if she bent down even a little, well… you get the idea.
An Extra’s Rise in an Eroge
Fantasy · Sensual_Sage