This story could have been amazing, if it wasn't for the atrocious translation and character development. You can definitely read it but in no way will you be able to immerse yourself into the story, with the way it is written. I would have loved for this to be edited and looked over, it could have been an amazing story if it was flushed out properly.
wouldn't it be better to say, "protect the people of the heavenly Doa". Considering it isn't just humanity that Is apart of it!!
"There's no need to be so polite. I'll teach you the Dao today. I hope you can always remember this merit. From now on, it's your duty to protect the humans of the Immortal Dao."
My Descendant Begged Me To Help Him Just After I Became A God
Eastern · Let me laugh
it's always annoying when they get the numbers wrong like this.
Even though the heavenly might was powerful, Jiang Changsheng was not afraid. The last time he broke through, the strength was already at the peak of the Dao Martial Spirit Realm. He was probably not considered weak even in the Creation Martial Realm because his strength value in terms of incense points had exceeded 600 billion incense points.
My Descendant Begged Me To Help Him Just After I Became A God
Eastern · Let me laugh
I really hope he doesn't come back as an enemy
He turned to stare at me and I almost stumbled back in shock. His eyes were pools of black with webs of the same color covering his eyes. He had on his face a wide smile that reeked of evil.
Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
TV · Saintbarbido
I can honestly say this was the better end result for me.
"You have an idea on how to undo this clusterfuck...I know you do, because I'm thinking of the same thing. Use it, it's okay. If there's anyone else who has your back apart from White and I, it's Equity."
Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
TV · Saintbarbido
I dont know why but I'm starting to get lost?
"I don't have a lot of conditions for you you to be in my life Doc. Just trust me...that's all."
Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
TV · Saintbarbido
I have no clue where I am time wise, it will probably be explained later on but it takes me away from the story.
Self Sabotage part 1
Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
TV · Saintbarbido
desire
The Pairing is Starfire...MAYBE. shrug. But just like any true relationship out there, the romance will not be instantaneous. They will have their own share of problems. Trust, fear, hate, love, loyalty...
Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
TV · Saintbarbido
I thought he can bring people back to life? did I misunderstand something?
His internal organs had been smashed. If not for his high realm, even the Rejuvenation spell would not have been able to keep him alive.
My Descendant Begged Me To Help Him Just After I Became A God
Eastern · Let me laugh
grab it by the nuts and twist!!!
The thing charged at me, and in that moment of sheer terror, all I could do was shut my eyes and brace for the inevitable collision. What else is there to do when you're about to faceplant into something straight out of a nightmare?
DC: System Shock (COMPLETED)
Anime & Comics · Wicked132