PenOugi

PenOugi

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Artist/Writer. English/日本語/中文 OK. ko-fi.com/penougi

2017-05-10 Beigetreten United States
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PenOugi
2 years ago
Replied to Amish_Scion

It's not a major part since romance tends to take over the plot when it's around but there will be subtle romance in the latter half. A reader can easily ignore it if it's not their cup of tea. There will be a few secondary romances since it impacts narration less though, if you're just asking about romance in general. Mattheus will basically be with us watching people make fools of themselves because of love, haha. FYI, I don't care who readers ship together. Romance will not be a focus for Mattheus so y'all are free to go wild with your imaginations—or not. (Especially since best girl will not appear for a while yet.)

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PenOugi
2 years ago
Replied to KairenConan

She "popped up later that evening" herself. I can't be an unbiased judged of my writing being rushed or not but if you meant the pacing, I don't like to drag things out unnecessarily. I don't want The Healing Crown to end up 4000 chapters long.

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PenOugi
2 years ago
Replied to KairenConan

Marquis is French so the title would exist in the country Panniore but not in New Albion, which has English influences. A female with the rank, by the way, would be marchioness(English) or marquise(French).

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PenOugi
2 years ago
Replied to Dvaita

Yeah. I never expected how expansive the cast would be when I first started writing this but have gotten to the point I'm resigned to cutting out a lot in narration to keep to the main storyline. Too much screen time and it would detract from the story of Mattheus Crown himself. (My outline is already pretty long and meandering would make it even longer...) On the other hand, I told my CE I didn't plan on adding side-stories once I finish this but have since changed my mind, haha. Too many unheard stories due to the main story following Mattheus instead of others like Lula, Holmes, or even Brunilda when she's off gallivanting around. Thanks for reviewing!

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PenOugi
2 years ago
Replied to Kisscraft

omg I'm an idiot. I was going to start privilege chapters in January and must have pressed the wrong button. Let me publish more chapters now so everyone can see the last two updates. Thanks for bringing this up! And apologies for not noticing earlier.

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PenOugi
3 years ago
Replied to LeWil

Ah. I forgot to add the POV in parenthesis in the chapter title. Fixed and soz If you're asking why the perspective change, it's mostly because the world is pretty expansive and Mattheus is stuck in his little bubble. If you're asking why these kids, they're going to be significant secondary characters...? When... Just read on. How? Brunilda :) If it's Lula's abilities... You'll find out in Volume 3. XD;;

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PenOugi
3 years ago
Replied to Scarlet_Embers

LOL It's not BL. Not those kinds of feelings. Mattheus assumes Illarion didn't like the Original because of the bad relationship with the brothers before. That Illarion hated him because of how the strained relationship hurt his best friend Edgar. It'll be revealed eventually but what Brunilda knows and Mattheus doesn't is the answer to one of the ongoing mysteries so far. XD

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PenOugi
3 years ago
Replied to Scarlet_Embers

Pretty close! This is more something innate to the Lula's little group of orphans that grew up in a harsh environment. Brunilda definitely would not have *forced* them but she also understood why the kids are like that due to having seen some things in their old world. Mattheus, in contrast, is a bit sheltered since he's only grown up in NYC (not even the worst areas or projects).

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PenOugi
3 years ago
Replied to Scarlet_Embers

Brunilda's name is on the rarer side and she uses her mother's maiden name too (Avis) since her paternal family is rather notorious *coughcough* Anyway, it's a regional version of Brünhild and most people shortened it to Nilda. "Brue" is an online nickname derived from a pun. We'll have a short trip to Mecane but Liam will come right after. ^-^

  • The Healing Crown original

    The Healing Crown

    Fantasy SYSTEM MAGIC MYSTERY TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI FASTPACED MYTH

    "I just wanted a normal life, is that too much to ask?" Mattheus bemoaned once it was just the two of them again. "Hah. Face the reality, Mattheus. You can resurrect a dead person with your skill Miracle Invoker and your best friend is a cat." Brunilda deadpanned. "You were never going to have a normal life." Theodoric He has found himself waking up in this world as Mattheus Crown. From a world with an overworked System, he finds life is in Hard Mode with possibly multiple people wanting Mattheus Crown dead. In a world with two moons, where magic and the occult have perfectly intertwined with scientific breakthroughs within the country of New Albion, ancient otherworldly beings stir within the shadows. The eldritch existences that always lingered around the fragile cracks of the material plane have come a-knocking. Shared Server: https://discord.gg/WpxD7AA

    174 Chs 627 Sammlungen

  • ReginaSin has joined The Spectres original

    ReginaSin has joined The Spectres

    Urban COMEDY SCARY SHOWBIZ

    Regina Sin was just your normal Chinese-American fashion design student in her final year of university. She had the Senior Show to worry about. An internship. And she was job-searching for when she graduated. The ghost haunting the apartment used her account to join a group of weirdos? Whatever; she had no time to deal with this. They turned out to be actual stuff out of folktales and legends? … Okay, fine. That’s pretty interesting. They want to meet up IRL? Um. She was curious too. Their presence messes with her designs? Aw, hell no! Never. Mess. With. Her. Art. ### The idea is like a mutant love child between a showbiz webnovel and a dark modern fantasy story. So basically readers who like Hidden Marriage, CCG, and Thriller Paradise would probably enjoy it?

    2 Chs 8 Sammlungen

  • Diavazo Logs: Motivating a Bookworm Protagonist original

    Diavazo Logs: Motivating a Bookworm Protagonist

    Fantasy

    4.37

    Yo. Name's Nori. I'm just an ordinary twenty-year-old university student—really—that woke up transported to this world called Gaellia one day. On my first day, I find myself thrown in jail and met my partner that will travel with me: an AI that I have a telepathic bond with. [Nori, there are monsters attacking the city.] Not my problem. "Big Sis! I bought this dress for you!" "Bro! Let's head to the gate to see who would get a higher kill count!" [Nori, if you do this mission, you can read 50,000 words of a new title—] Ah! Alright already, I get it! **On hiatus for volume compilation** ***Volume Two being roughed out*** {Note: Written in 1st Person POV. Nori is nonbinary. Romance-free for Nori but lots of misunderstandings happen.}

    60 Chs 463 Sammlungen

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