He is low on both. Yeah no, it's not like he's low on both but lack them entirely
"Because you're smart," Hermione deadpanned.
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It's far beyond even that
"S-So you don't mind this position?" Hermione asked. She sounded nervous. I couldn't guess why.
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This author has no idea how 1st POV works
I didn't see the little bite Hermione gave her lower lip either. But I certainly felt what she did next. She practically molded herself to my side, getting close enough that I could feel her heartbeat speed up. Still, I didn't look up from my book and she soon joined me, basically reading over my shoulder.
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If the MC don't see the glances then don't state it since it's a 1st POV story...
"That's it?" Hermione muttered to herself in surprise. I didn't see the glances she exchanged with Heather and the youngest Weasley, or the one she sent Ron's way only to see him literally drooling and trying to throw himself over the edge of the Top Box.
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I would, He is aware of animagus and literally said the dog seemed "human". In fact not using it just shows how utterly stupid he is...
His continued animosity toward me didn't seem to matter much. Heather and Hermione seemed convinced and he was outvoted, if his opinion even had any weight in the first place… I thought it was a bit weird to have your dog's name as a codeword but shrugged that thought off. If it worked, it worked. Not like I actually intended any harm to Heather or her friends. I made a note to suggest a better system for recognition to Heather in the future though.
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She just became 16
Even with her ahead of me on the stairs, I had to look down slightly to meet her eyes. The Girl-Who-Lived was surprisingly short, maybe 5'1" at most. But that didn't mean she wasn't blessed in other ways. Her short frame was curvier than it had any right to be, with bountiful breasts, a tiny waist, and wide hips.
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She's barely 16
Heather glanced back at me curiously, having heard the commotion I made to get behind her. Bright, emerald-green eyes locked with mine as if she was looking into my soul. Round, wireframe glasses rested atop an adorable button nose, framing her eyes in a way that did nothing to distract from their brilliance. Straight black hair was tied up in a casual, messy ponytail, giving Heather an effortlessly beautiful vibe as if she'd just rolled out of bed looking this good.
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How dumb you have to be to be completely broke with near reality warping powers...
"I am, quite literally, broke, Albus," I stated bluntly. "Penniless. My last Sickle was spent sending you my previous letter. If you had not responded to my request as you did, I would have been homeless by the end of the week. The current job market is not kind to Muggle-borns."
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It's Saitama moment you uncultured mongrel
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Good first chapter but I really don't like the MC's looks, I hope it won't be mentioned to much so I can have an anothe mental image for the MC.