Howard, who was particularly active today, stole the opening remarks. "To Priya!" The friends all raised their glasses in a toast.
TV · thebigbang
It’s honestly really disappointing. You had a very good concept and you failed miserably at executing it. The premise of your story is that someone died and was reincarnated as the son of Superman. That was your premise. Solid right? Here’s where you failed. He doesn’t act like he’s reincarnated at all. He doesn’t act older than his age. He has the emotional range of a toddler. The only knowledge of the universe that he’s in, that he uses is fucking identifying people’s faces and names to their comic book counterpart. That’s it. Oh wow, this is Dick Grayson. He’s Robin. That’s it. That’s all he uses his knowledge for. It’s really sad. I’m not saying he should go and get a fucking lantern ring or something like that. No I’m saying he doesn’t try and better himself with the knowledge that he has or try and interfere with the plot lines when he sees them happening. Also, how the fuck do you forget that your dad is Superman? He has a panic attack because his heat vision occurs and then he forgets that his dad could take his heat vision easily.
Cause the author made John ooc and not a reincarnation. He refuses to act like an adult and is entirely the age his body is rather than his soul. It’s all a lie.
And caused millions of dollars in property damage. Congratulations.
Kinetic energy was fully transferred through, deforming the sphere at the point of collision...
TV · Saintbarbido
He’s joking, right? She has like two Pulitzer Prizes. And that’s before canon. This is why I don’t think you realize that your character is not a reincarnated character. He doesn’t act like one at all. He’s just an OOC who has some knowledge of the universe he’s in. That’s it. He’s not an adult and a child’s body. He doesn’t use his knowledge. He doesn’t do anything other than act like a child and ignores 90% of his knowledge.
Whoa, Mom's kind of a big deal, ain't she?
TV · Saintbarbido
Did you really censor yourself? Cringe.
""Sorry Jon but Video Games got nothing on your mom's @#*'ss. Also, neat trick, who taught it to you?""
TV · Saintbarbido
No, you did not because you haven’t fucking applied it until now. You didn’t learn shit.
'I learned not to panic under stress. I learned not to lose control. I learned how to beat my fear. I learned mental discipline.'
TV · Saintbarbido
Did this fucking idiot forget that his dad is Superman? Like Jesus fucking Christ. This doesn’t feel like a reincarnation story. It feels like an OOC John Kent fic.
Since he is a god like being, it’s hard for him to have a single person from MHA. I’m not saying harem, it’s just that there’s not really a specific girl that would fit him. Unless you were to bring like Jean Grey into MHA. Or have an older woman/heroine go for him.
It’s getting more and more Chinese, the longer the story goes on. “In America” and “brother” “groveling” etc is just getting too blatant. You do realize that as a translator, you can edit this shit out right?
Suits: A Lawyer Surviving TV Chaos
TV · thebigbang