WillMissQ

WillMissQ

male LV 13

I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks

2017-10-27 Beigetreten United States
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WillMissQ
WillMissQ
5 hours ago
Commented

Oh no, it’ll take a few years off of his 10,000+ lifespan. What a terrible thing. He’s aiming for godhood. That means an infinite lifespan. Immortality. What’s infinity minus one? Infinity. Who fucking cares about taking a few years off of his life?

He also had a new Demon Sword to master or it would begin to steal his Life Span. 

The Knight of Ruin(DxD)

The Knight of Ruin(DxD)

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

WillMissQ
WillMissQ
10 hours ago
Commented

No one else has chakra so the sharingan is fucking pointless. No chakra = no genjutsu. No chakra = no seeing chakra in others which means no predicting what they can do. The best you can do is just see things move slower and that’s it.

WillMissQ
WillMissQ
14 days ago
Commented

I lost interest the second that he didn’t kill them when he had the chance. You’re just dragging out the fight at this point. Pulling a fucking Goku. You gonna give them a Senzu bean also?

WillMissQ
WillMissQ
1 months ago
Commented

Can’t believe the author has the audacity to call this weak to strong. He starts off with one of the strongest devil fruits from one piece and there are zero weaknesses.

WillMissQ
WillMissQ
1 months ago
Commented

You’re trying to say that he is not a crazy killer, but he’s clearly a psychopath. He doesn’t care about anybody except himself, and whatever fancies him at the moment. He’s manipulative but also really bad at that. In the end, you’re just writing drama for drama’s sake. There’s no actual reason for the drama, it’s just that you wanted to write it. It doesn’t fit in with the story at all.

WillMissQ
WillMissQ
2 months ago
Commented

Double spacing every single paragraph isn’t going to make it seem like the chapter is longer, it just makes it easier to tell that the chapter is shorter and you’re trying to cover for that. This chapter was so short it didn’t even last 1 minute of reading time. It’s taking me longer to type this up than it did for me to read this chapter- no this blip of a scene.

WillMissQ
WillMissQ
2 months ago
Commented

One is Korean and one is Japanese. It’s not gonna happen.

(Finally! Kenji has created his own guild. I think I'll do some very small-time skips until we arrived at the canon. Who knows, maybe recruit Sung-jin Woo into his guild)

Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]

Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]

Anime & Comics · SlimeSage

WillMissQ
WillMissQ
2 months ago
Commented

This one

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Now he could be called a certified Superman, after all, have you seen a Superman that doesn't fly?

Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]

Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]

Anime & Comics · SlimeSage

WillMissQ
WillMissQ
2 months ago
Commented

There’s something powerful about Superman’s cape. Looking up in the sky and seeing him just floating there, cape flapping in the wind.

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WillMissQ
WillMissQ
2 months ago
Commented

If that’s the case, then most of the strong people don’t fucking exist because they didn’t get their powers until much later on in their life. They aren’t as strong as they were and if they still somehow exist, then their skills aren’t as good because they’ve had less time to develop them which again equates to them being weaker than they are in canon. The reason why I say they might not fucking exist is because they could’ve died with weaker skills and older age. Being 20 years older or even 30 years older when they got their powers there’s going to be a massive difference when they were first exploring gates. They aren’t the young, strong individuals anymore. They are old. They probably made mistakes in their old age and probably died in the gates. If you’re gonna do something like this, consider the butterfly effects.

(Some of you guys must be confused, I read a comment that said about Gates being released ten years ago, and then I realized my mistake, so I'll make this world an AU. The Gates appeared 30 years later instead of 10 like in the original.)

Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]

Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]

Anime & Comics · SlimeSage

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