I like how his moral struggle was written. [img=recommend]
"I made the right choice." – He said, clenching his fist.
Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World
War · Stoicist
Generally it should be not possible at this point. It should take a long time to do that. They could become under his rule, but cannot be merged with his current subjects. Too many people died and have to much grievience against eachother.
The plan to dominate the barbarian and place them under Stahl's umbrella has begun.
Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World
War · Stoicist
Author you should rewrite this part because it is illogical, additionally it breaks the immersion and read flow. But overall your novel is quite enjoyable so far.
About a month later…
Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World
War · Stoicist
I see. Then you were using it right. Thanks for explaining.Hard to tell sometimes because the tone someone would use doesn't necessarily come through when writing/typing.
Going to the source of the sound, we can find Gray, running desperately through the rows and shelves. On his back was the girl from before, she was unconscious and was showing no signs of waking up and on his front was his hiking bag.
Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
Fantasy · Renovator
Sorry I cannot post my long answer. I don't even know if this reply will get through or not. Some error -1000002.
Any minute now, Linde would knock on his door and beg for attention, and he would spend the rest of his waking hours disciplining her for being so obviously jealous at Adela's arrival. It was good to be a noble scion, even if he was merely a Baron's son...
Tyranny of Steel
History · Zentmeister
Sorry to the author that my english was not up to par and what I wrote might have came through as rude. Thank you for pointing it out. As a reader I stated that I am expecting an explanation in the story. It is the author's choice to give or not. And it is my choice to pay for his/her work and continue reading or not. If I see somethng that bothers me as a reader I state them in the comment section. And I state that too that if I like something. And when I see something that is just not in line with a character, I expect a good explanation from any author in later chapters. Else the writing is just pure bad in my opinion. And I think you use the hypocritical word wrongly here. I was rude and my style was unintentionally overboard, that is true.
Going to the source of the sound, we can find Gray, running desperately through the rows and shelves. On his back was the girl from before, she was unconscious and was showing no signs of waking up and on his front was his hiking bag.
Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse
Fantasy · Renovator
It is okay. We are telling different opinions. I am happy you liked it. [img=recommend]
That was what happened to Emery before being transported to this world. Thus, he couldn't think of anything other than this place being a world after death or a world of the gods. But that was before he heard the old man saying they would return to their original world after seven days.
Earth's Greatest Magus
Fantasy · Avan
Abby had decided to join Minos' army a few days ago. But, even though they hadn't formally done it yet, Eda was already getting used to the idea of living in this place. And for her, that wouldn't be bad, the perks were excellent, and still, she could live closer to an old friend...
The Rise of the Black Plain
Fantasy · RVN_1998
'First, I'll save Grace's life. Then I'll see what I can do... But I swear, one day I'll avenge your death, Samuel!' Vivian swore it in her mind as she walked away from that place where she was before, looking at the crater that her bodyguard's sacrifice had formed.
The Rise of the Black Plain
Fantasy · RVN_1998
An average population of 2500 people/village is huge.
Unfortunately, during their mission to reclaim the territory, the army discovered that four villages had been wiped out during the civil war due to famine, cold, wild animals, or bandit attacks. This loss meant the death of at least ten thousand people, a significant number in the small and sparsely populated Stahl, where immigration was almost non-existent. It meant less mouths to feed, but less hands to work.
Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World
War · Stoicist