Vallori

Vallori

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A university student doing student things in life. Trying to get by like everyone else. And I write stuff that makes me happy, and I hope you enjoy it too, *HappyFace*

2017-09-17 Beigetreten Global
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Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
Replied to Blac_Hurb

Short: 1000 - 1500 words. Longer: 2000 - 5000

Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
Replied to Kreuz8

No. I have been sick so I haven't been writing in months. Been really sick actually. But I think I will stay on this website. It is too much of a bother to relocate to another website, I realized. Have a Wonderful Day!

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A New Path

A New Path

Anime & Comics · Vallori

Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
Replied to DetachedDreamer

I feel obligated to tell you that; Fairy tail will be a recurring group but not the main focus. Itachi is the main focus, so the only reason to include them fully is if he were to join the guild. Have A Wonderful Day!

Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
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It has the potential to be funny with it crossing so many dimensional barriers to get the MC's crew. But the problem is it needs A LOT of editing. The structure of the paragraphs is all over the place. And from one author to another; Do not put multiple dialogue lines in the same paragraph (it is so weird to read). You also need to take another look (maybe three) at the grammar. There are many obvious mistakes even a non-English speaker can point out. Otherwise, I advise downloading the free version of Grammarly, it will fix most sentences here. Also, try and minimize mixing arithmetic words with ordinal numbers. If it is system-related you can use; 1, 2, 3, 4, like that. But if it is anything else, for Example, age then it should only be this: twenty years old... Not this: 20 years old. There are many things I can point out. But here is a summary: - Shorten paragraphs. - Limit the use of arithmetic words, instead go with ordinal numbers. - Check grammar more than ones (use Grammarly) - Do not put two different dialogue-lines of two different people in the same paragraph. I hope this helps. Have a Wonderful Day.

Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
Replied to Murdock007

Happy you think so. That is why I write it, I fine it relaxing. Have a Wonderful Day!

Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
Replied to CodeZeroZero

His predecessors are. He is not (yet).

"Don't tell me she is my student." The talk with Hiruzen kind of hinted at just regular civilian students. I don't know how to teach someone to fight; I don't even know how I'm throwing a punch. My predecessors know, I do not. Honestly, I'm not even sure that this is my body. The only time I feel like myself is when I cook food or sleeping. Just walking feels unnatural because of how effective my body is at breathing.

The Chilling Adventures of Set

The Chilling Adventures of Set

Anime & Comics · Vallori

Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
Replied to CodeZeroZero

Yeah, I sincerely believe this is nothing for a powerful shinobi. Have you seen the kind of stupid physics-destroying things they do in this show? Also, this is just for fun, don't overthink it. Just enjoy it if you enjoy it.

I am a competent martial artist now. My body is remembering movements, sort of like muscle memory when you're gaming. It's exactly like that actually. It's programmed into me. My body moves without me understanding it or perceiving it. I could probably dodge a bullet without even realizing it. Oh, and I am fast. Speeding bullet fast which I found out is actually average in this world. A freaking bullet is not anything special here.

The Chilling Adventures of Set

The Chilling Adventures of Set

Anime & Comics · Vallori

Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
Replied to oceansage

Trying to demonstrate Hiruzen's badassness. Also, I don't really care how my MC looks. I don't think he looks bad, I think he is demonstrating a realistic mentality. It won't change, so get out now if this annoys you. To save us both future headaches. Have a Wonderful Day!

Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
Replied to WhyAmIStillHere

I don't know. No love, I suppose. I am not planning any of this just writing whatever. We will see what happens. :)

Vallori
Vallori
3 years ago
Replied to amaturewriter

No. I just take my time with my stories. I write when the mood is right. And I have a few chapters done - unedited.

  • Child Of God (Story undergoing rewrite currently) original

    Child Of God (Story undergoing rewrite currently)

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE COMEDY

    4.55

    READ THIS!!!! A/N: This story is currently under the process of a complete rewrite. This means chapters will be missing while they are rewritten, and those finished will be a lot better than the rest. All the love, Vallori What does it mean to be born as the daughter of existence? Well, Maleficent is sure gonna experience what life as you know it has to offer. (I own only the characters I create myself. Anything else goes to the original Authors.) BYE!

    15 Chs 1k Sammlungen

  • Wings Of A Crow original

    Wings Of A Crow

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY OVERPOWERED PERSONA

    Itachi enters Earthland, enjoy! Itachi will be a blend between his manga persona and my own take on it. Stoic and silent, hard to approach. Don't go in with expectations and you won't be disappointed if it isn't your cup of tea. Have A Wonderful Day!

    10 Chs 323 Sammlungen

  • The Chilling Adventures of Set original

    The Chilling Adventures of Set

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE OVERPOWERED

    A man wakes up in the slums of The Hidden Leaf Village. He had nothing to his name except a mysterious and the power of Absolute Ice Maker. The multiverse is in for a freezing revelation. This is a pretty chill fic, nothing dramatic or anything of the sorts. No amazing plot twists, just a fun little read where we might encounter some questions about life, love and learning. It's fanfic still, so expect what you know to expect, but there will be mostly a fun time. NO harem collector, or God-level power spike that then turns into a worldwide slaughter. Just a cosy little read. A/N: I do not own anything except my own created character. Go and support the original work before you read this fanfiction. Remember to be kind to each other and to take care of yourselves. There is a tomorrow.

    9 Chs 59 Sammlungen

  • The Mad Armada original

    The Mad Armada

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY OVERPOWERED

    A mad soul descends into the world of One Piece. With the knowledge and skill to rule, only a very special Goddess will know what is to come. This is not a fanfiction to take seriously. It's not exactly a parody, but the characters will be OOC. How much varies depending on how much they are gonna be present in the story. The character will stomp through most opponents and armies, but there will obviously be opposition - as there needs to be some sort of tension. Otherwise, it would just be boring. _________________________________________________ I don't own anything except my own characters. Go support the originals creators.

    3 Chs 27 Sammlungen

  • The White Lotus original

    The White Lotus

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM COMEDY OVERPOWERED VILLAIN

    This is a spin-off of my other fanfiction; A new Path. It's not needed to have read A New Path as only the first chapter has any real connection to it. This story will slowly evolve into its own series, and rarely if ever touch upon what is going on in A New Path Just for fun and trying to find motivation to write something new again.

    3 Chs 46 Sammlungen

  • Guiding Light original

    Guiding Light

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE COMEDY

    4.68

    When the Throne Of Paradise is without a Lord, it falls on the Four Guardian Concepts to find a Champion Worthy enough to sit upon it. _________________ [The first 10 chapters are essentially one long prologue. They are written to explain and outline the basics of the story. They are not fillers, nor are they pumped with action. They are there to introduce the main characters of the story. ------------------------------------------------------- I was getting sick of seeing so many evil/perverted stories so I really wanted to make something like this to make myself feel better. I enjoy a nice guy, so if you want evil, corrupted or anti-hero, this isn't your cup of tea. The MC won't kill easily, almost never. He will only take a life if there is literally no other option. Again, if this isn't your cup of tea, then do NOT read. I don't wanna see comments saying, "Why won't he kill?" "Just kill them!" This was your warning, the MC will not change his morals just because you're dissatisfied about his behavior. -------------------------------------------------------- If you've read my other work and followed me for a while, you know the drill by now. Say it with me... NO HAREM! -------------------------------------------------------- [Disclaimer] - I do not own the picture used as the cover for this Fan fiction. It was the most accurate picture I could find for what my MC looks like. I do not know who the creator is, but if they want me to take it down, contact me here through the review/comment section. Thank you! I do NOT own any of the material used in this Fan fiction, except the characters I created myself. All credit goes to the original authors, so please go support their work first. Have A Wonderful Day!

    21 Chs 229 Sammlungen

  • A New Path original

    A New Path

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM FAMILY

    4.62

    A professional Hitman reincarnates into a multiverse he thought to be only fiction. But, has his mentality regarding life and death changed during his reincarnation? Have A Wonderful Day!

    234 Chs 7.7k Sammlungen