Sorry for the loss, take your needed time ti grieve and don't worry. We will be waiting for you. Best wishes and hope you feel better soon.
Nice chapter, but please try to use the correct forms for his or her. Every chapter you refer a girl as his, and it is kinda annoying to be honest.
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But that is not what i'm complaining about. He could have bowed as a sign of respect, but kneeling instantly doesn't make sense for me. I don't know, that's what feels unrealistic. And i totally agree about what you said of murdering for a minimal disrespect, but there is a massive difference between the two actions.
I understand that don't think it's bad. I mean the part about kneeling to a elf king he just met. Don't Gods have any pride to kneel just like that. It feels extremely unrealistic.
A God kneelong to a King, even if it's an elf and he is not as powerful as he was doesn't make any sense. And even less if he does it happily without fear present. In my opinion obviously.
Gracias por el capítulo, pero por favor no hagas que Kurama desaparezca en la grieta por años como Mohn en la saga original. No tendría sentido todo ese drama.
Nice chapter, waiting to see more of the Digital World. Stay strong author.
Ah okay, that i didn't know. Sorry for my comment then.
I don't mean to sound obnoxius, but the expression in Latin would be ad astras abyssumque, the phrase you made was more from the stars and the abbys, not to. For the rest nice chapter and great story building.
Great chapter and great story, thanks.
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