Kinoro

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Just a man, fascinated with the imagination of the talented writers overseas. If you would like to help support me check out my Patreon :) https://www.patreon.com/Kinoro

2017-07-07 Beigetreten United States
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Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Posted

a strong entry to broaden the universe the author is building. I truly look forward to any future works. Good job, and thanks for the time well spent on reading.

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Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Commented

this reminds me of what heavens looks like in litow

After realizing that his body was no longer confined to the rules of Aterium, he expanded it.

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Replied to Flick_Lick

I wonder if this could be Gravis' killing intent?

The Abomination King's blank expression didn't change as it looked at Shang.

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Replied to Clain_

made the same comment a while back lol

Just like Abomination Lords, the Abomination King was covered in completely black scales, and it had two velociraptor legs. Its tail was long and muscular, and it had six muscular arms that ended in five fingers with long and sharp claws. Its waist was thin, but its chest was wide and muscular.

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Commented

to be honest, I ddont see why all the hate on it. The guy isnt going to start out as Johny Sins. The carrot and stick method is usually a good one when trying to get drastic changes fast. Is having a consequence such a bad thing narrative wise?

FAILURE: LOSE A RANDOM ENHANCEMENT ]

Pornstar System

Pornstar System

Urban · demon_king69

Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Replied to ParagonDaoOfBS

part of me wonders if this is inside a certain main characters self created universe while he was preparing to fight heaven

The Lightning Emperor also nodded. "We Emperors are pretty sure that the level six Concept of Death represents the end of life for an entire world. Every human, beast, plant, or whatever would die, creating a world filled with Death Mana with no Life Mana in sight."

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Commented

Going to need to concept of freedom for that one maybe? lol

"Naturally, the level six Concept of Life should represent the transformation of a dead world into a living world, and since our world isn't dead, you also can't comprehend this Concept."

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Commented

concept of "Dead World" very familiar lol. With no other world (that we know of) to ascend to to learn it either.

The Lightning Emperor also nodded. "We Emperors are pretty sure that the level six Concept of Death represents the end of life for an entire world. Every human, beast, plant, or whatever would die, creating a world filled with Death Mana with no Life Mana in sight."

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Commented

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Kinoro
Kinoro
1 years ago
Replied to Horunte

actually burst out laughing at this lol

The Kred raised his other hand to stop the boy, but Luke kicked him again and made him lose sight of the incoming attack. George successfully stabbed the alien, and Khan's attack followed.

Chaos' Heir

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

  • The Perfect Specimen original

    The Perfect Specimen

    Sci-fi

    4.8

    ON PAUSE: FURTHER INFORMATION BELOW In a world where zombies are common and everything is evolving to acclimate with radiation, our Main Character has a special trait about him that helps him acclimate and evolve with the harsh conditions as well. But where will that lead him, and will that be enough? Take a look into my mind for what I like to consider "The Perfect Specimen" Websites also posted on --------------------------- https://www.wattpad.com/story/160293915-the-perfect-specimen https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20663/the-perfect-specimen ------------------------------------------------ It's my first novel and I am writing here to just get some feedback. Please don't hold back and give me everything you got. I'll take mindless rants and very constructive good criticism. I just appreciate the fact that you took the time to read and review if you did! -------------------------------------------------- Further update. This novel is now on pause. I have been taking everything in from the experience of writing this novel, both positive and negative feedback. I will revisit this novel in the future after I get a more concise picture of what direction to take it in. In the meantime, I am going to be writing another novel on my own time and after I finish it, I will begin the daily upload process. After I finish, I will come back and revise this story on my own time and re-post it after fixing everything I want to fix. Thank you all so much for reading, I will be back with this and more stories in the future. Until then, be on the lookout for me! :)

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