DabanCrow

It’s a very solid read. I’m really liking it. I’ll be sure to read this when it gets updates. Speaking of which, I think I’m owed a chapter after this review. :)

Alrighty. I’ll be straight and honest. This is just a pile of garbage made by some nobody loser in China. They clearly only skimmed through Naruto and don’t actually know anything about it in truth. So many things the main character has said prove they don’t know anything about Naruto. Hiruzen a good guy? No he isn’t, it’s very clear that he has pushed the village to the brink and the effects his actions had still last even after his death. Danzo being a fool? Kinda, but he is also one to know when something is important. But he also has a backbone at the weirdest times. Itachi a family murderer? True. But he is truly just a child that was fooled by Hiruzen. The villagers came to the conclusion that Naruto was associated with the Nine Tails? Nah, it’s very clear that more than likely it was the Root that made it public knowledge. Same with the failure of Sakumo. The Uchiha Clan chose not to interfere with the Nine Tails attack? False. Danzo stopped them and prevented their assistance. Fugaku was swayed by the “Hawk” faction of the clan? No. Until the very end, Fugaku was against the Coup. He knew that the clan was digging their own grave with it. Also, the ramen stall was supposedly filled to the brim with customers… no? It’s usually empty for the most part, that’s why it too Teuchi so many years to open up a real restaurant. Is it also weird that I don’t like the measurement system? No? Good, cause it’s bad. The system isn’t realy explained on how it works or how the system measures things so you are left guessing. With how much the MC props up the third Hokage on a pedestal you can feel how much he is trying to insinuate that Hiruzen represents the leader of China or something. Kinda annoying.