ArdentAngel

Seeing there are supposed no major grammar mistakes, I gave this novel a go. Thanks for misleading the audience with your non-understanding of proper English review with unreal facts. Next time, please don't state facts you aren't sure about. So let me put this out there first: sentences have no head or tail, they are mushed together to barely make sense of what author is trying to convene. Paragraphs are also randomly split, but this doesn't really bother me all that much. And vocabulary, there are lots of mistakes as well. No, English isn't my primary language either, but I can't enjoy such broken English either. I have no idea if grammar improved later down the line, since I couldn't stand reading past the first couple chapters. Otherwise, thanks for the review, it did gave hope and a hint at what to expect from the story. Unfortunately, bad grammar did turn me away at the end, as happens with too many novels on this site.

You do realize you your comment just defeated the purpose of having reviews. If you don't agree with his point, express yours and be done with it. He has a point, and view, expressed it for like minded people. To some it will help, to some, not so much. But that's how it is with different people with different tastes.