Yes! like what the other guys said. You could ask for some donation from readers that like your story. But! don't go premium. Not like I have a prejudice against premium, it's just that even if you go premium, once your novel starts to get some attention it will be available on other sites and it will become useless.
If you want to read this novel these are the things that you should be aware. Misspelling ~ It would have been ok if there were only a few misspelled words but there to many that you would have to reread the sentence to understand it. Grammar ~ Along with misspelled words are sentence that is hard to understand because the grammar is messed up. Fighting Scene ~ Just skip the fight scene. It's like a 3 yrs old kid playing fights with his toys. Story ~ Just give up! And my most hated thing about this novel is: It's Premium ~ I don't know what made the author thinks that this will is worth the premium but for me it's a waste of "Fast Pass". Don't bother spending your FP, if you want to read this novel just wait until it's unlock. It's not worth it! **: this my opinion and Review!!
He took out three bags 1 bag sugar 1 bag salt 1 bag... hm???Spices???[img=faceslap] What spices??? there are many spices out there. Don't tell me it's a curry powder, since curry powder is a mix of spices!
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original Mercenary System
4.14
Leon used to be a Special Ops agent, one of the best agent in his country. After 10 years of service he retired from his profession and wanted to live a normal life, get normal job, be married to a beautiful wife and to have children. Until the car that he's driving fell off the a cliff because the brake din't work. During in the midst of the fall time seems to have slow down. Leon suddenly cursed in his thought "F*ck! if survive this fall i will definitely kill the person that cut off the brake cable, or if I reincarnate I'm gonna find the one who did this and kill him. Sigh, if I survive this crisis I'm gonna find a beauty of a wife and mistress then have as many children that i want." PS: If you are the owner of the cover picture please forgive me for using it and if you have issue of me using that picture just tell me and i will remove it. Thank you.46 Chs 2.7k Sammlungen
This is one of the best original novel out there. It has a good story that is engaging, the MC and the FMC's have their own personality and are fleshed out well and are not shallow, the chapter update are somewhat constant, the writing quality and grammar of this novel is one of the most better quality for those writing an original novel, the WORLD BUILDING ~ well there's only a little bit of world building since it's a slice of life story. My only complain of this novel is it's pacing, more specifically; the time progress. It is too slow, I have read up to chapter 130+ but only more than a month have passed in the story and in this time, many events had happened. But overall it is still a good novel
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