Started out pretty alright. Decent beginning of a relationship between the MC and Leah (bitter shapeshifter girl in the original Twilight movies/books), and I could see it becoming a cute and natural relationship...then the author got indecisive. Out of nowhere Rosalie is suddenly revealed to be the MC's mate. That's fine, I guess, potential for a similarly cute and comforting relationship with a lonely Vamp and then Leah and the MC can have a more sibling-like friendship. Then the author puts up a poll or something to decide who the protagonist ends up being paired with...and Leah wins. So a single Rosalie was added to the story for literally no reason and is relegated to a desperate stalker, pretty much. I'm not reading a story where the author lacks basic foresight on where they want their plot to go. It just doesn't say good things about the fanfics future. Not to mention the MC's main motivations are 1) getting high and 2) eating. He literally has no other hobbies or whatever. So, odd decisions by an indecisive author who seems to keep flipflopping back and forth between Rosalie and Leah (on who gets with the MC) and a boring protagonist...all together it doesn't make for a compelling story. I'd honestly recommend a re-write.
Not every magic system. It's only recently that magic in certain forms of media (mainly anime) gives the user the ability to enhance their body's physical performance and even then its rarely permanent. Like Reinforcement in the Fate series, which is temporary physical enhancement. Traditional magic doesn't give you the option for a stronger body - just look at Harry Potter or DnD. You don't see Wizards or Sorcerers in those universes showcasing superhuman strength unless it's a racial trait and never with magic.
I nodded. "That's right. Apparently I would do great in any class, but they boiled it down to Magician, where I could rise to a High Ranker in no time at all, or to a Warrior, where I could make use of my natural physique. Of course, a man's passion lies with the sword, so I picked that."
The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory
Anime & Comics · HappyVainGlory
Criminally underrated Chainsaw Man fanfic.Characters are great, you care about them, they interact in natural ways you don't often see on Webnovel, they actually grow as the story progresses--they're just good, well-written characters. Especially the MC. His growth as a character is amazing.Story Progression could do with some work. The relationship between the MC and his love interest is rushed at first, which was hella confusing because it came out of nowhere, but it does become more natural as the story progresses.Writing quality is great. Probably not perfect but I didn't see anything when reading through it and neither did any mistakes break my immersion (so there's no easy to spot mistakes).More than anything, this feels like it could actually take place in Chainsaw Man. It's not a one dimensional power fantasy where the MC drools over Makima or Power or Himeno and just breezes through life. It's difficult to properly explain but it's just dark enough to be taken seriously while still injecting comedy to keep things a little light just like the original Chainsaw Man series.
Ah, yeah, that makes sense. Thanks for explaining it to me 👍
Furrowing his brows, Gal asked, "Really? Their brother managed to claw his way to the Rank of Saint without any natural talent, yet they pursued the mystical arts? Were the three of them not close...?"
Mushoku Impact
Anime & Comics · Einlion
A bunch of juiced up gymbro-lookalikes surrounding a fucking amazonian of a woman. Worst part? I remember her. The coach for the swim team, Nagiko Uwabami (A/n - from a work by Ando Hiroyuki; the one with the cat woman and the holy numbers are '444306'. She makes an appearance near the end) and an absolute babe. Sure, she's as pretty well-muscled as an athlete should be...but she's also got a massive rack and a fantastic ass. Not to mention, from where I'm looking, her muscles do pretty much nothing to detract from her feminine charms. But maybe that's just me and I have an undiscovered muscle mommy fetish...Who knows, really.
So What If I'm In A Hentai?
Anime & Comics · A_Pretty_Calm_Guts
Mommy...sorry...mommy--Ahem, anyway, I'm pretty sure this is who the Author is talking about.
A bunch of juiced up gymbro-lookalikes surrounding a fucking amazonian of a woman. Worst part? I remember her. The coach for the swim team, Nagiko Uwabami (A/n - from a work by Ando Hiroyuki; the one with the cat woman and the holy numbers are '444306'. She makes an appearance near the end) and an absolute babe. Sure, she's as pretty well-muscled as an athlete should be...but she's also got a massive rack and a fantastic ass. Not to mention, from where I'm looking, her muscles do pretty much nothing to detract from her feminine charms. But maybe that's just me and I have an undiscovered muscle mommy fetish...Who knows, really.
So What If I'm In A Hentai?
Anime & Comics · A_Pretty_Calm_Guts
So, he's a typical manlet Japanese MC. That's a shame.
Looking at the gore I'd just committed...I really didn't feel like a human anymore. Which was true. Half of my bloodline is made up of two non-human bloodlines. Xenomorph and Fanalis.
Marvel/DC: The Fighter
Movies · Lazyy
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original Marvel/DC: The Fighter
4.66
Living on the battlefield...you'd think someone would die on the battlefield, no? Well, surprisingly, you'd be wrong. A transmigrated teen finds his calling in life when he awakens on a battlefield in 5th Century England as a 13-year-old boy with a peculiar body, peculiar knowledge and even more peculiar is that every time he says 'status' a screen appears in front of him! How will this transmigrated teen survive in the early middle ages? By killing a whole lot, of course! (A/N - I just wanna give a heads up that the system won't give stat points or missions and it definitely won't have a shop. It's only purpose is to show the MC his stats and the best and most effective ways to train to improve himself. I'd also like to point out that I'm going to be adding some very heavy supernatural influences into the story, so expect to see superhuman heroes, vampires and werewolves, and maybe even the odd Giant. Oh and the DC elements of the story are going to be very scarce. Don't expect to see Superman or any other uber-OP Hero/Villain. I'm only adding a few people and plots.)14 Chs 3.2k Sammlungen
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The First Hunter of DxD
4.76
Born in a world of Devils, Superhumans, Angels, and Dragons...how will a simple child grow to be able to survive in this world? Simple, he will become the Hunter to hunt all. The newest Predator of the world. The First Hunter for the world of Devils, Angels, and the Fallen, has arrived. And he wasn't the only thing to arrive. (Cover doesn't belong to me, and nor does the game Bloodborne. They belong to their respective owners.)4 Chs 615 Sammlungen
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Transmigrated as a Brute Into a World of Anime
Finding himself awake, in a foreign place with a foreign body and foreign instincts, will Ban be able to adapt to this new place or will he once again be an outsider? (A/N - What I mean by a Brute is the Brutes from the Anime 'Killing Bites' https://killing-bites.fandom.com/wiki/Killing_Bites_Wiki.)3 Chs 82 Sammlungen
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Reborn in The MCU without Cheats, just (Un)Lucky Coincidences! (Rewrite)
A young man wakes up in a white room after being hit by a truck. The room has no windows and only one door which is equally as white as the surrounding walls. At first he thinks he's about to meet God but as five people, dressed like evil surgeons and doctors, enter the room, commenting how he looks like a strong child he knows somethings up. "I know I've reincarnated but where was my meeting with God? The Wishes he owes me?! Where are my cheats?!" It wasn't until after a while that he realized he'd been reincarnated not with straight-forward cheats but with the ability to gain power through (un)lucky coincidences.2 Chs 44 Sammlungen
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Transmigrated into HOTD but with a Twist!
4.57
Transmigrated into the anime Highschool of the Dead, Ryu Hattori has been given gifts that have not only changed him but also the world. (A HOTD and Resident Evil Fanfic!) Author Tags: Harem, R-18, Violence17 Chs 2.8k Sammlungen
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Reborn in Marvel without Cheats, just (Un)Lucky Coincidences!
A young man wakes up in a white room after being hit by a truck. The room has no windows and only one door which is equally as white as the surrounding walls. At first he thinks he's about to meet God but as 5 people, dressed like evil surgeons and doctors, enter the room, commenting how he looks like a strong child he knows somethings up. "I know I've reincarnated but where was my meeting with God? The Wishes he owes me?! Where are my cheats?!" It wasn't until after a while that he realized he'd been reincarnated not with straight-forward cheats but with the ability to gain power through (un)lucky coincidences.9 Chs 367 Sammlungen
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Werewolf in Highschool DxD
A boy wakes up after a groggy dream about him meeting God. But he soon finds out it wasn't a dream - It was all real! He's been reincarnated as an avatar to that God! Follow Takuya as he shows the supernatural world of Devils, Angels and The Fallen, the might of a Werewolf!5 Chs 492 Sammlungen
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Reincarnated Into An Amalgamation Of Anime Worlds
He wanted to be hit by Truck-kun on purpose with the goal to reincarnate and despite knowing it was slightly insane and being bored with his mundane life, he did it anyway. He got his wish but he isn't just reincarnating, he's been tasked to become strong enough to fight with others to entertain a bored God, in some kind of sick game. He doesn't mind, however, as long as he gets to make a harem and seduce beautiful girls, he'll fight whoever they want him to.1 Chs 66 Sammlungen
Guess I just lost motivation for writing, mate. Honestly, I might do a re-write of one of my stories one day but who knows? All depends on whether or not I have time with how much work I've got with my job lately.
Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!
Movies · Flaming_Lines