Just call it Energy instead.
Satoru frowned. "I guess I'll have to try something serious." He took a deep breath, channeling his energy as his mana wrapped around his right hand, creating a visible, swirling aura.
Onepiece: I'm Gojo Satoru
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I’d change it so he doesn’t call him a yonkou, its pretty off putting, maybe “someone on Roger’s crew” or something similar would be better. Also it’s pretty weird Shanks couldn’t bypass his infinity with haki, when garp could before. Maybe Shanks is taking it easy on him or something, but i’d write it into this otherwise people will complain when he actually takes a hit from someone. “Oh but shanks couldnt get through even with haki.”
This cliffhanger, i’m holding on for dear life author. Don’t leave me hanging like this man.
This book is missing almost the entirety of chapter 84 and after, it’s good till then but only 3 paragraphs are translated for each chapter at that point. I’m highly dissapointed, its been happening on a lot of books recently.
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Don’t be dissapointed in him getting an Arcanine. It’s one of the fastest land pokemon, it was even planned to be a legendary pokemon for gen 1 before that got cancelled. It got caught up by power creep, it’ll be really good here. Extreme speed, morning sun, flare blitz. He already has Dragonair which has the same typing as salamence.
Gratz on the comic adaptation. Excited to see what comes next.
Navy is fine, but id edit the part about Shanks having lost his arm, it hasn’t happened yet and won’t happen until Luffy eats his devil fruit.
Onepiece: I'm Gojo Satoru
Anime & Comics · ZetharQuinn