I don't know if i'm not mathing correctly, but shouldn't mihawk be like 6 years old right now? The one piece story starts in the year 1518 according to the author, and right now is 1483. Mihawk was 41 years old at the start of the manga. If i'm mathing correctly, mihawk should be indeed 6 years old. what's the deal with that?
Damien watched as the small figure ran out and in front of him. Standing a little over three feet in height, Mihawk was now two and a half years old.
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Bro, whare are u????
i can't believe you've done this. i'm leaving
I have no intention of altering the plot to cater to any picky desires. Of course, I want people to enjoy my craft and feel free to drop your story ideas in Discord but do not feel obliged to announce your departure.
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Petorge?
As the pain subsided and the two souls settled into a perfect fusion, Peter, or was it George(?), grappled with the realization that he now possessed the memories of two separate lives, in a body that felt both familiar and unfamiliar at the same time.
I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
Movies · AlienWarlord
baby come back!
At this point the sword is his, I think
Without hesitation, the soldiers mobilized. Peter, armed with Michonne's sword, dashed toward the approaching horde, skillfully slicing through the zombies as he deftly maneuvered among them. The soldiers swiftly drove up to the nearest building, using their vehicles as makeshift platforms and some teamwork to climb onto the roof.
I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
Movies · AlienWarlord
This fiction has the lamest identity reveals I've seen by far. Not that I've seen that many, but they still stand out by how much they suck
I'm disappointed by this development. I thought he was cooking up some scheme to steal some canon power for himself, but the author just went and handed him some made-up method to grow stronger. It's not entirely bad, but it definitely is disappointing.
it's not as dramatic or as exciting as the canon arc but it still feels good. Maybe it would have been better if Haku put up more of a fight but it's stll acceptable
Ren used chakra flow mid-strike and his sword was suddenly covered with a layer of wind nature chakra. Ren's sword cut through Haku's senbons and before Haku could react slashed through his neck. Ren didn't attack after that as Haku's body collapsed on the ground and then his head separated from his body.
The System: The Real Civilian Shinobi
Anime & Comics · Version_401
You need to separate the dialogues in two different paragraphs when there are two people talking. The way you're writing them makes it feel like it's the same person responding to themselves. At least at first glance, which makes the reader have to take a second glance, and it breaks the immersion.
"Where's father and the others?" I asked and my mother replied with a smile. "I came home early to prepare food since your brother can't be trusted with the task. They will be home soon."
Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey
Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn