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Reincarnated in the Marvel Universe, within the Spider fanfiction, loved that fanfiction
Its a fanfiction of a fanfiction while I read about fanfiction.
Just for fun, Might write more If i get into it.
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this fanfic is great honestly the only problem is that right now its been a little while since it last got a new chapter......................................that's all I really have to say about it
It's almost 6 am and I haven't slept I can't give an accurate and helpful review but ima try. Writing quality is great compared to the usual slop being pumped out in webnovel. Wait is it actually? I remember it was decent enough. Stability of updates. I can't criticize you or else ima be a hypocrite. Development, well are you gonna make it even more AU than the spider already does? And when, or does he interact with the MC of the spider? But the MC seems like a bit of a wuss and becomes badass and a sparring partner with wolfie all of a sudden dunno meh. Character design? Haven't seen enough of everyone's character but ima guess storm will be the strict type, Xavier a manipulative bastard that thinks everything he does is for the good of people, magneto tho, how'd he know of the disturbance? Inside info in a mutant specialized government agency? Anyways I hope you can show what goes on inside the MC's head more to shed insight towards his mentality and sht. Like most fanfics no world building, well it is already in a heavily established universe so it isn't needed right? Wrong I think for me atleast. The greatest part about one piece's world development is while luffy does something, something else goes on, we can get a sense of when by the wanted posters and info about what he has done and so on. So even if you just cite info fans probably already know, you should also just not keep the POV tied to him and shift perspectives. Don't let him become the center of the world, just because he doesn't plan on going somewhere make it have some stuff happen. Like this I mean, just because the MC doesn't plan to make his way to X doesn't mean nothing happens when he makes way to Y. Make like repercussions like news and rumors about the wrecked area magneto and the bunch had a squabble is. Like since it seems it is pretty early on then rising racism against mutants and growing public unrest. Who wouldn't? Some have horrifying powers.
Shi.ty Pussy MC No new and interesting moments. Shi.ty Pussy MC No new and interesting moments. Shi.ty Pussy MC No new and interesting moments.
I don't like conflict of a characters mind due to protecting them! Aythor your doing an ITACHI with MC! God dam pn nooo I wish they can fixes this fast I don't want to see a tragedy because of the bold headed dumbass! Also if he can't pony up how come The other telepath or frosty training bud telling him due after shield visit! Cough*
Ok uptil he became bad it was amazing infact I loved reading it but once he became evil it was stupid and pointless so I’m sorry to say that I’m dropping it it rlly did have a m a z i n g potential but it was ALL lost when he became evil
It’s good, the mc does not suck, contrary to what a lot of people said. Mc is I bit weak in the beginning but he becomes strong pretty quick. He doesn’t want to kill people because he’s a hero? What the ****, are you guys insane? He’s a normal person, normal people don’t default to killing people, this isn’t a xianxia dumbass. The mc is a pussy beta male? What the hell are you saying? I don’t even think you know, “it’s only been 18 chapters and he’s not fucking his harem of 1,000 women”(exaggeration) he’s fucking fifteen, you want him to seduce a woman and **** her in 5 months?(that’s how long the mc has been a mutant) don’t just assume that women are all sluts. beta makes are a thing that exists, but just because the mc isn’t a manwhore doesn’t mean he’s a beta male faggot. You didn’t even read up to ch 11.
It's a pretty good story. That said it starts off ****. The si MC is a weak whimp and gets his ass kicked then gets powers... Xavier is being an idiot messing with minds and then the MC makes his own way being all emo all the time. I like the story but I've had it with the emo ranger stuff.. Its also been months since the last update so I doubt it will continue... Too bad Iceman is a badass character in the hands of someone capable.
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It's pretty good so I look forward to see more interesting things you have created in this story I totally understand that what you meant 😊😊😊😊😊
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This is a great series that I honestly couldn't put down everything from the character design to the overall flow of the story was great. I especially liked how hypocritically and how much like Magneto Xavier is in this. In actual comics, it's implied but in this, it's straight-up said. Keep up the good work author
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Ouh man you have a good story, good MC .......................................................................,.,.. thanks author thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks
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Pussy mc -check Naive mc- check Beta mc -check Heroic mc- check He don’t wan to kill cuz he’s a hero- check He forgives everyone- check Conclusion- dropped, byeeeee