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Velocity.

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What happens when a 12-year-old gains superpowers and a heroic system? Mad things!

'Ding*'

[ Stop 2 robbers ]

He quirked his eyebrow. "Two robbers?"

[ Yes ] or [ No ]?

He glanced at the goggles and then the options. [ No ]

"Ah no. I'm too young." He said and scratched his head.

"Wait, no, stop!" The worker wailed.

Beep beep beep beep beep*

The alarm in the shops went haywire and robbers who wore black get ups and ski masks. Emerged.

The first grabbed a UPS and another grabbed as many hard drives as he could.

"Let's get going. I'll take right."
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Abigail_Okoi_Obuli

The ML lead is everything you'd expect from a child; reckless and stupid. Thankfully, he's got Ernestine to balance things out. I can tell this will be a fun, comedic book to read. Unfortunately, it's not my cup of tea. I find the writing style to be a bit too unpolished, but it has it charms. The biggest issue is that the characters feel a bit too stiff and one-dimensional, but it could be passed as a creative style. Personally, I'd say it could use improvement. Don't let that deter you from reading, however. I'm a bit too stuck up for such fun reads anyway.

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FavourEkele_1969

ML is 12 so forgive him if he's acting dumb or reckless ok? FL Is the opposite. It will be comedic. I will develop the background and build the characters to the best of my ability. Cheers😁✌

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