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I, as in my incredible wisdom, have decide to publish my idea on self insert. The mc doesn't want to be included in any way with plot or interact with people at all.
"Why should I become the greatest wizard or a savior, if fate already has a whipping boy?"
Chapters will be irregular.
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It's been fun to read so far but why is this in the Novel Section and not the Fanfic section? ..............................................
Im giving five stars just for that summary but if its interesting and i like it ill give another good review.
the writing quality is a 4 out of 5. pretty good and easy to understand. the story development is a 1 out of 5 super slow and random. he just randomly gets half his core split and it's not explained if it's just his current magic, his magic potential or something else, jsut that is is split the character design is 1out of 5. characters change opinions just because. they have no feel to it and it seems very plain. updating stability is a 1 out of 5 not updated in the last month. the world back ground is a 2 because it's just changing the hp world but some of it seems weird like number thing. overall a 2. poor story also this is just what I feel no need to comment about what you feel. make a new review if you have different opinion rather then replying. GG
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I liked the story in the beginning, but you ruined it when you decided on the split personality. It got annoying instantly. Very unfortunate, because the premise of the story was quite interesting.
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Pretty good work so far. I'm only at chapter five, but it has decent elements of development and comedy. The writing quality is readable, but could use some revision. Overall, I'd say the story is well paced, but I'd like to see more magic development in the upcoming chapters. For prospective readers, you should know this is kind of like a slice of life story. It starts slow, but feels like it's progressing well. Thanks for the read!👍
Waste of time. This is basicly a bashing story with no redeeming qualities. So I will just leave this review and move on to better things. Just hope this author gets better at fleshing out characters.
Overall, this story is one of the best Harry Potter Fanfictions ever made, and it’s pretty sad that the author abandoned it.... The Main Character is very abnormal compared with other fanfictions’ MC’s- he doesn’t go with the current, he goes against it. Ps: Spoiler!!! The two-people-in-One thing going on with the MC is VERY COOL!!! I mean, haven’t we all wondered where the soul of the person that the MC has taken over went? Well, this story answers that question in a rather bizarre (and very cool) way!
Si quieres un mc que piensa mucho pero hace una mierda y que está nerfeado con la mitad de su poder por la gracias del autor esto es para ti sino pues a la mierda
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OK maybe I was abit harsh while making this review even if the story was already dropped it has a lot of potential - the development feels abit TO all over the place I don't mind the fastness though
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i love it. that's it. i think the way he look's is really cool and i like his just go with it personality i also like all the facts and details you've added in that are different from the original. i really really like it so please don't rewrite it or anything it perfect the way it is
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It was good, to the point you split his core in half and made him weaker. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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What ruins this story completely is the split personality and the split magic core. It was fine up to that point, however, I despise stories like this. I thought that they would merge straight away and make the soul strength double or something. But now we have an extra constantly talking in his head... The split-core makes no sense either. I get if it halved his magic but you split it light and dark. Magic is magic... there is no light and dark side this isn't fcking StarWars xD Spells can have an element but magic is magic...
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