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Undertale: The Scientist
4.64 (16 Bewertungen)
Zusammenfassung
"Hey, your majesty, I have a question."
"Yes, Victor?" Asgore calmly replied.
"Why do you have dead corpses of children in your basement, perfectly preserved, and not buried?"
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Will be updated frequently, but no set schedule, don't feel like forcing myself into a schedule that'll likely turn this into a hiatus book.
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Incredibly well written. Interesting mc. Has individuality from the game. Overall, very interesting. Waiting a day for a new chapter fills you with patience 💙
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The story is good, even more so that it is from undertale where there are almost no stories about it, the only problem would be that I got confused throughout the story due to the timeline but it is explained over time so I have no problems, great story and thanks for keep writing!!
Since there are only 5 chapters, its a little difficult to get an ideal gauge on the story, but from what there IS to read, it seems to be a decently impressive novel, especially considering the fact that it appears to be a little more than just a stupid “wish fulfillment” story. There is an actual change in the timeline, maiing the story less predictable, there are few writing mistakes, and the few mistakes that are there are so unnoticeable that it barely changes the story. There is an actual prologue that explains ehy the protagonist does certain things such as kill without feeling, and it seems to be updated frequently, even though there isnt a set schedule. Tl:Dr: all in all, its well written and worthy of a collection so that you can keep an eye on the future story.
*Shrug* you know undertale always have a special place on my read list.. even though some of them is kinda.. weird.. (This fanfic is good).........
Really love this story hope it isn’t dropped I like this author a lot hope you come back from whatever happend
The author asked for comments and instead I one up him with a review! Don't have anything substantial to say the the story is just great at the moment with only 13 chapters. But I like the way it is written and how it is going so far. Really curious for what is going to happen in the future!
Things are definitely are improving as there are less mistakes overall. only thing I don't like are the upload times but that's me being impatient, no fault of the Auther as it has fairly consistent upload rate.
I love the story so far keep updating please love the story and the grammar has almost no mist akes
Pretty nice, but mostly cause there's no competition. I mean, come on, the second place UT fanfic has the yuri tag. Now onto the issues. Some grammar mistakes here and there. The character swears too much and it's obnoxious. Asgore seems much more aggressive here, but maybe we can excuse that with 1 it's just the start of the war and 2 Frisk was a kid. It's slice of life, which is a synonym for boring and time wasting. 4th wall breaking isn't funny enough to justify how much it takes you out of the story. Hopefully it doesn't pop up much more. I think the author fails, at least so far, to make things make sense. There's a whole ecosystem underground where the monsters somehow stay alive, have alcohol, vegetables and meat, etc etc that can be explored and explained to make the underground make much more sense. And yet what do we get? A brainlessly inserted "bing" engine. Ultimately, I think the author fails to make an attempt to maintain the world and story's immersion and suspension of disbelief.
this seems to be going well so far, other than a few misspellings that can easily be ignored. I really like this.