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Two/Sides

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In the middle of unclaimed land, at the bottom of an undiscovered cave, lies a building, bustling with light and fanfare. To the regulars, it was their shelter from the woes of life. To the visitors, it was a place where they could seek new hope. In a world divided by borders and races, only in that place could humans, elves, dwarves, beasts, monsters and demons make peace. There, they become able to look past their differences and offer each other a hand.

"Such is life" the Master would always say. "Bad people lie, and good people also lie. That's why we shouldn't be people. We should just be us."

"But we can't just be "us". They don't allow us to. That's why we hide from the people... hide from them."

This is a story of a group of radicals, who hide from the skies and from the public, all to be able to spread happiness to a bleak, war-torn world.

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    While the writing quality is good, it feels like the story is trying so hard to be mysterious that it becomes ambiguous. Even after 6 chapters, you have no idea what the point of this story is. Yes, the story is just as ambiguous as the synopsis itself, neither telling you what this story is about. Who is the main character? What is the main conflict (if any)? What can we expect from this story? Absolutely nothing is explained. It's basically just watching a couple of people talk to each other where we don't even know the significance of these people in the first place. So actually, it's like watching multiple faceless people talk and do stuff that seems to hold no meaning. Maybe if author stopped trying so hard to be 'mysterious' and explain more clearly on what is going on, it would be a more enjoyable read. But if you expect me to spend my time trying to decipher what is going on in the story, I might as well just go read something else.

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