The rise of the shadow monarch in tensura

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M3duS4p

(Chap 1-17) Well, I'll separate the review into 5 points: * The writing quality is very bad, a lot of inconsistency, and this bothers the reader a lot. But I decided to disregard this part a little, since English is not his main language. * It updates almost every day, if not every day. So this part is fine, the problem is that the rush to post chapters can cause problems in writing the chapters. * The development of the story I don't know much what to say. It sometimes seems to be being developed and other times not. * Character designs don't have much to say. * And the backgroud is the Central World backgroud from the past, the problem would be that we don't know much about that era, so I'll say it's fine, since this is a fan fiction and the freedom is with the author. That's it, I hope I can help the author of the story to improve it. Good reading to those planning to read it, and good writing to the author.

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UnenlightenedOne

overall it's good but held back by bad grammar

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VEL_DORA

I like the story it's interesting at first i feel empty maybe it's because at start the character is plain i feel that they are lifeless but when the story goes on i starting to feel them and i am proud of it. Thanks for the amazing story author keep up the good work.👍👍

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Eternal_Dragon_God

The background is nice but the development is a bit forced and character doesn't have any defining personality. The transition from hero egg to demon lord was forced and the explanation of story is a bit bland. It is very difficult to form any emotional connection to the story and other characters are like npc. Overall average story

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Just_Listening

good story. I will waiting for your next chapter but I think you can make the chapter longer because for me the chapter is too fast. .........................

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Karma_T3000

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Jalter_Avenger

Los personajes son vacíos no tienen su personalidad es solo escribir por escribir deberías mejorar primero en como darle vida a los personajes y luego rehacer la historia o crear otra, no se siente la emoción de leerlo solo se lee por leerlo no se si me explique bien