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"Even with days where one was showered in glory at the pinnacle, there will eventually be a day, where one has to step down, and leave the stage."

Inspired by The King’s Avatar written by Butterfly Blue.

In one of the most popular eSports game known as Glory, Ha Yerin was a popular competitive player in South Korea who has been following the game since it’s official release back when she was only thirteen.


Even amongst the professional scene, Yerin was still regarded as a top-tier player that could rival anyone from top to bottom. Despite being at a young age, she had grown to become one of the best players in all of Glory, given the title 'The Unparalleled Queen.'


However, just when she was about to reach the peak of her career, obtaining her first championship, she was accused of cheating. Having been framed by her opponents, Yerin had no other choice than to forfeit the match and suffer the consequences.


Along with the pressure from the eSports community, Yerin who had no one to turn to decided to move and study abroad, giving up her lifelong dreams of Glory.


Yet after moving to China, and starting a new life, due to a myriad amount of reasons, Yerin is once again dragged back into the game as her skills shine once more. 


Under the love, gazes and unyielding desire to turn away, watch as she develops her status as the Unparalleled Queen once more!


“It’s a new start.” -Su Muqiu

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    SinB
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    Hey all, Author here! This is my fan-fic on the novel The King's Avatar by Butterfly. Although the some names and events are changed throughout the novel, I still hope you would enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing! *I'm still in need of a novel for this book, so if any of you are graphic designers, please help me out here! xx. I would greatly appreciate it. (I will also be giving credit) So hope you enjoyed my shameless review! Thanks once and again and enjoy because 'It's a new start.' -Su Muqiu

    6yr
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    Akitsura

    This book is a spin-off of The King's Avatar, however, it does not take place after the original web novel. The story is set at possibly the very beginning of The King's Avatar, as an alternate timeline. So far, Ye Xiu seems like a main supporting cast in the story much like how Tang Rou/Su Mucheng was in the original web novel, which is pretty refreshing. As of the current chapter (22), the record breakings of the new server is being dominated by Ye Xiu and Xuelian instead of just Ye Xiu in the beginning. I like the current arc because I always liked the so called "pro player interaction" in the original novel, where there was that comedic relief. I'm not sure if Tiny Herb being at Xuelian's uni is going to be similar to how they ended up being Tang Rous practice partner in the novel but I'm excited to find out. Personally I really like this novel simply because it reminds me so much of the original web novel, I'm no professional critique but the style of the author does not seem too far off from butterfly blue when TKA was written. Idk if I'm just comparing TKA and TQA but TL:DR is that if you like TKA and was not satiated by the ending then give this spin-off a shot.

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    4yr
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    WENTIAN1O1

    Will there be romance between the mc and ye xiu? NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

    6yr
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    pokbjh

    UwU it is me super Mario. Dis novel is the best ever Luigi would call it Better than Mamia Mia Pizzaria. The characters are even better than the original Napolitana pizza. If I was so brave as to suggest that the original work is like pasta without any sauce. Mmm it is the Buffalo Mocharela of fanfictions. But you need to remember that the true spice of this novel is the author I Sinb.

    4yr
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    yaoyueyi

    Objective review below: Alright, so I can't say I can give a super high rating because the story only has three chapters as of right now and little is revealed yet. So, overall score of 3.8 stars. Writing quality = 5 stars. Considerably good for Webnovel standards, although there are still a few mistakes (mostly capitalization) that could be caught with some ****** proofreading. (e.g. ”most of the silver Equipment were developed by Professional Teams.“ Silver here should be capitalized since you capitalized it before and it's the name of the equipment) Stability of Updates = 5 stars. Seems pretty good so far as well; author, please keep it up! :) Story Development = 3 stars. Little to none is revealed about the plot at the moment. This, again, is because of the lack of chapters, but I am sure that as the story progresses, more will be revealed and this will definitely be changed! I'm excited to see the story head in the direction the synopsis implies. Character Design = 3 stars. Again, because of the lack of chapters, there aren't much revealed about our main character, Ha Yerin. Minor characters (e.g. Big Thigh & others) seem to follow a few common character tropes, but that's okay because he seems to be not that important as of right now. World Background = 3 stars. Seems to be the Earth we know with Korea & China. Would like to know more about the game itself (Glory) but I guess since 1) this is a fanfiction & 2) there are still little chapters, not much is revealed. Overall, I see good potential with this story, and it's readable even if you haven't read The King's Avatar (I haven't)! Tip would be to include a scene that catches the reader in a little more in the first chapters; I was somewhat bored by the fact that she was just walking and logging in or whatnot. Perhaps include a flashback at the very start to where she was the Unparalleled Queen and playing the game? Also feel like less all about gaming and more focus on thoughts/emotions could be good for the first few chapters because it does get a little boring just watching them play. I would save in-detail gaming scenes until later on in the story and keep the first few chapters brief with the gaming description. (though, then again, gaming is not my favorite genre, so that could also be why!) Good read all in all though. :))

    6yr
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    midnight_bloom

    Hi! I'm not really into these kinds of novel but right from the start I already got hooked just by reading the few chapters. I must say it's exciting and informative for a non-gamer like me. Makes me appreciate the gaming world more lol. I think the pacing is just right- it matches the energy that the story requires. Good job, author.

    5yr
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    acikbacon

    The story is to fast and I don’t really like yerin to much...I hope there isn’t any romance between yerin and ye xiu. I WANT SU MUCHEN.. but still good luck for your story

    6yr
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    Titan1um

    I hope we get to see how this novel unfolds. plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

    2yr
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    Jin_Daoran

    I'd like to say that this is the story you read when you want to experience the glory that is TKA again from a different perspective. I certainly enjoyed what there was of this story. The style is similar and the FL Ha Yerin/Xuelian is walking what looks to be the same path as Ye Xiu. Undeniably, the image of these two deities striding side-by-side through Glory is strikingly attractive. I want to see it. I definitely want to read it happening. Not as a romance though, as two people finding someone to understand the pitfalls and exhilaration of playing games as genius/top-players while holding steady to their morals. ...actually that does sound like a romance...can I incline the author to a 'very deep friendship' instead? lol If not, then please treat it as me talking to myself. The character of Ha Xuelian in TQA isn't as defined as Ye Xiu's however, especially since most readers likely came here from TKA. There is a danger of becoming a second lead in her own story if this continues. But it's early days still, and the story is still finding its feet, so I have plenty of hope. I read a lot of fanfic, I don't review many. This is me giving encouragement to a fellow author whose story I think may head in interesting directions.

    4yr
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    Rasune
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    More chapters otherways very good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters!

    4yr
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    GraciaFortunata

    Hmmm? Did this novel being remade? I'm quite sure I've read this before,but I have a feeling like the story has changed from the one that I read?? Or was that just me? 🤔🤔🤔 Well, it's indeed been so long since I last read it... 😅

    5yr
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    Icezeroz

    Really loving the story so far. Good progression so far, especially for a fanfic as they tend to rely too much on the original for all the storytelling. Although the novel will probably never hit high in the rankings because of the slow updates but I highly recommend it to all TKA fans. Also I love the name unreasonably much for how ****** it is :)

    5yr
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    Pripriri

    WTF. SO SLOW UPDATES!!! 1 WEEK 1 CHAPTER. WTF. JUST DROP THIS . WRITING NOVELS AND THE UPDATES IS NOT STABLE........................... 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾🏉🅾🅾🅾🅾🅾................ DDDDDDRRRRRRRROOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPP?!?!!!!!!!!

    5yr
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    SpeshelWolf

    It's good as the original but I hope it won't end up having a fall out between Yerein(I hope that's her name. ** I'm bad at remembering names) and Su mucheng over all cool

    6yr
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    Astolfo_My_Waifu

    4 star just because it's about king's avatar ... Also kinda unrealistic and the speed the story is moving is way too fast ... All in All not a lot of potential

    6yr
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    ZachDinoBoy

    I Love it please write some more I have head it in my library for ages hoping for an update, I know it's been years but pretty please come out of retirement 😁😖

    7mth
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    Iles
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    so good why are they No more Updates? [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

    1yr
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    Niks_Nelly

    Does anybody know if the author is going to continue this book or if she has it on another website? Cause im Really loving this and i love the original.

    3yr
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    Daoist549762

    More more more more more more more moreMore more more more more more more moreMore more more more more more more More more more more more more more moremoreMore more more more more more more moreMore more more more more more more moreMore more more more more more more more

    4yr
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    Daoist549762

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    4yr
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