Kapitel 24: Rewrite or Not?

Sorry for being gone for so long because of how busy am I with study and other shits…Oh! And should I make a rewrite or not because of how boring and confusing the story is because in every( 90% of the fics) dxd fanfic there was always the MCs with the boosted gear and confusing because of how Complex 'time travel' is. In this rewrite I will probably add some Interesting' plots, but in this rewrites there will be with some similarities in it compare to the old ones,but the MC this time will not be Issei but Issei older twin brother instead, and of course 2 older sisters with one- year age gap difference. As for the R-18…well I'm still inexperienced and don't know how it will turn out properly it will be way later in the series.