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The Mightest Mortal Grand Order
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It begins with a boy meet girl situation. A world at stake, an Inexperienced Mage and a dying Demi-shielder, their joy, and suffering. But as a result of the pondering of a mischievous Imp a new question is born what if... instead of an innocent ignorant mage, there one who is a Hero in in his own right. Someone who holds both the best of both Man and God, Herald as The Earth's Mightest Mortal... SHAZAM!!.
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writing quality could use some upgrades, for example the characters names have some typos to them. not only that but the grammars could use some help for example am -> I'm some sentences need to be rewritten again. the story development is good, i can't say more because it'll become spoilers for others character design is ok the updates hmmmm are not great but not terrible either world background..... this is FGO the world is already complex as it is fyi i wrote this after I've read chap 11 ps. Buggy pulled a fast one on me, can't believe he became one of the yonkos