The Legend of the Yellow Haired Butcher (Namikaze Minato Self insert)

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Wolfsword

I like the two chapter that is actually about the mc and even like the idea of how you're doing the story I just wish the other six chapters weren't just stuff that doesn't really matter when you currently only have two chapters on the actual mc. I feel like if you had added these little journal entries later in the story like when you had even ten or so chapters it wouldn't be as harmful but when there are six journal entries and only two actual chapters. I say this because it is like watching a tv show and out of 8 episodes only two have to do with the actual plot the other six are just random stuff that don't fully even make sense because you are alluding to stuff that's not important cause we have barely gotten to know the mc. I am you have a couple of journal entries before we even get to understand anything about the mc.

LV 13

WaltzWannaWrite

READ THIS REVIEW FULLY, AUTHOR!! I will give you five stars just because I liked the idea of Minato insert and good writing quality. BUT!!! I have complaints AUTHOR!!! I only want to read the story from Minato's POV. Some relevant character's POV here and there in the middle is Ok. But, I absolutely don't like the Journal idea. One chpater, I am reading how Minato started his journey. Next, it is about how he trashed Iwa Shinobis in the form of Journal. And the event is about some years away from what is happening in Minato's POV. This seriously breaks the flow man, and I honestly can't bring myself to wait for new chapters as I don't know what the new chapter will be about. From Minato's POV which I am eager to read or the Journal form that I dislike. I SUGGEST (emphasis on suggest) you to maybe rewrite this fic. Don't shy away from the effort it will take as I can confidently say that if you do rewrite this in a linear timeline manner, this will FF will be hella popular. There are lot of Lazy readers like me in here who will enjoy reading that way instead of trying hard to connect the flow of events in the chapter by ourselves. Good Luck, Bro.

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UmU_UmU_UmU_UmU

best naruto fanfiction ever everything is logical and have explinatiom have no plot holes real life naruto no pg over all osm UmU UmU Umu

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Akshay_Dere

Very good novel it is excellent.worth it Is this novel really over plz reply. It was very good.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 3

Aayush_Gaur

Bro you were translating a story earlier, "reincarnated in bleach as a nobel"... I found the story overview interesting.. can you guide me to original work.