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what if Uzumaki Naruto wasn't the only Uzumaki in the village. what if there was an orphan that was also an Uzumaki, but the village first didn't know about and second he kept hidden. To find out who he is and what is his story.
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Schreiben Sie eine Rezensiontoo many female characters that is close to mc. maybe they are not romantic interest yet but. is it gonna be yukino or will it be a harem???
Until now, the story is really good and seems to have a good storyline. I would say one of the top 10 Naruto Fanfics that i read, until now. The Author is doing a good job🙂 PS Dont get stressed if in the future some people give bad reviews. Because; If somehting is good and the people enjoy it, most of them will not give a review or coment. But if some people dont enjoy or have something to complain about the story, most of them will give a review or coment...
Writing Quality → 2/5 Stability of Updates → 5/5 Story Development → 4/5 Character Design → 3/5 World Background → 4/5 "Hihi"...just stop...
Shit!! this altor knows how to write a story, just perfect_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
the plot and story development is great but i suggest use grammarly to correct few grammar errors and try to make the characters not to force like not respect hokage and sensei u can try to watch naruto to gain few idea and the characters persona and style
One of the best Naruto Fanfics I have read so Far. For now, I am intrigued and like where the story is going. I don’t have much too comment other than perhaps improving on the updating stability but its understandable since this is done for fun and part time. I am hoping it won’t have a disappointing ending or ruin the current flow later on. So far, The Author is doing a good job.
Autor thelastgrim
Chapter 1 and 2 is so confusing the time skip so big. Im so confused with the reviews saying its good but after reading chapter 1 and few sentences in chapter i already knew this fanfic is doomed. Well thats all im gonna say im not gonna try to read this one its like reading a novel from chapter 1 jumping to chapter 20 in a blink anyways ciao
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