The Hidden Dungeon in the World of Otome Games is Tough For Mobs

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SentToOblivion

If I don’t like my own story who will? I‘m actually enjoying the direction I’m going so far, it’s better than some of my previous works in my opinion.

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H75_N

W.Q: Not very good. S.D: same as cannon, no creativity. Seems as if MC himself doesn't have any knowledge about cannon. C.D: Not good discription given, even cheats are not used properly (Dungeon world cheats) MC's personality is same as MC of otome game world. U.S: 13/week it shows as of now. W.B: Very messy, not explained properly. Not very good as of now still much better than most fanfics which are being uploaded on webnovel at this period of time. Still to much like cannon, new O.C's are introduced but their presence don't change story in any way maybe something different will happen in future chapter's. But, as it is now not my cup of tea. [24-04-2023]-[ 16 chapters uploaded ]

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UNCHAINED_PREDATOR

the story seems good but there are just too many nerfs, giving the mc an op ability and then nerf it until it's useless, it doesn't make much sense to me. And i think even the mc's brain got nerfed by seeing how stupid he is.

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TFH

author support... i have read both novel and anime... it always irked me that mc thought so lowly of himself and didnt chase Angelica and Olivia... though he ended up with them anyways it was because he was forced... then comes a wild Noelle... honest mc should out the pants in the relationship. i like yuri in hârêms but olivia and angelica.... at least have mc join lol, makes Leon be like the third wheel

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Genesis_999

Previous reviews deleted by the trash author (I like it he got power before going to the academy but it's too slow man I do hope you don't streach things out in the academy which we have already seen on both anime) (Yeah you can delete this too even then people would know that it's trash Lo l. like seriously why would webnovel give authors an option to even delete other’s review it's not like the review are for him when we review it's for other readers sh ee sh) (No it's just a advantage and a perk to trash authors like you who create trashy m c similar to them or just make m c suffer which is considered "comedy" to them Lo l low lives t ch and making a kind or good m c be ta, si mp or sub miss ive to bi t ch es I mean people of your kind don't like good woman and are be ta si mp to bi t ch es and sl u ts well 'you do you and favor those kind of woman only and you make even good female characters start acting like a bi t ch. Do consider they aren't your characters to ruin. Yeah?)

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Pilotfranco

I don’t want to explain all the reasons it’s bad. Have a look and you’ll understand. It’s very cliche, basic, and extremely cringy.

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Tim_QQQ

copy paste trash with minor adjustments. . . . . . . . ...........................................................................................

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TheBookBinder

Easily the best fanfic of Traped in a Dating Sim.The MC is not a reincarnation of Leon, and the writer makes him OP without being edgy and seems to be taking the story in a new direction after the duel against the 5 idiots.As for the romance, it seems to be centered around Livia and Angelica. It doesn't seem like there will be more but even if it will be a harem, the writer knows how to manage the dynamics of a relationship without making the girls to be trophy wives.( Honestly the romance is EX rating).Looking forward to see the story progressing further.

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Charlotte_Mage

I must say, this is one of the best webnovels I've read in a while. I love how the 2 stories are mixed into one another, which gives a realistic power system. character development between Angie and Olivia is so well done, and the way the harem is slowly coming along isn't forced, and I love it so much because it actually plays on their character. and I love that the story deviates from the main plot of both after a while because if it had been so from the beginning then there would be no point in this, so I love this very very much. please keep up your fantastic work, and I really just want more chapters, hehe. 😁

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_Shiromi_

¤ Writing Quality [★★★★☆] ※ Not good,improving... ¤ Story Development [★★★★☆] ※ MC doesn't have any knowledge about world story(cannon).This feels almost same to cannon now. ¤ Character Design [★★★★★] ※ Initially, I thought the MC's personality was similar to that of an Otome game protagonist. However, in Chapter 2, during a meeting with Agatha Fou Layman, Felix Fou Stardia's ex-wife, Evelyn Fou Layman, Agatha's daughter, and Agatha's unnamed son, the MC was able to endure their insults, showing some level of resilience. Although the MC's personality may seem lacking and with some issues, I believe it will improve as the story progresses. Additionally, I noticed that some characters undergo significant development, such as Evelyn, who initially shared her mother's view of those beneath her as inferior. However, after interacting with the MC, she seems to have changed for the better, which is a positive development. There are more aspects that I would like to discuss, but overall, the story has potential, and I look forward to seeing how the characters' personalities and relationships develop. ¤ Updating Stability [★★★★★] ※ Currently 9/week. ¤ World Background [★★★★★] ※ The story takes place in a Kingdom where women hold the topmost position in the social hierarchy and men are subjected to their rule. The world is filled with monsters and magic, and there exist two distinct types of humans - the old and the new. The old humans are unable to use magic but excel in science and technology, whereas the new humans possess magical abilities. MC is a rare individual who possesses a unique ability called the "Mediocre Sage" but is a half-breed with a composition of both old and new human DNA. This ability is exceptionally rare, and those who possess it have long been extinct. Overall, the story bears resemblance to the anime "Otome Games Are Tough For Mobs" and "In a Hidden Dungeon Only I Can Enter," and provides an interesting take on a world where women hold power, magic and science coexist, and a half-breed individual holds a rare and powerful ability.

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Jakov_Palac

I like it 👌 The story is cool and even if I read the whole thing through the night, it was very enjoyable

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cavaliere_royale

buy real abilities and skils instead of single time use ones, something for combat and daily life ones i think it would be better than mass destruction skils useles at the moment........butdu as yu like the story is good

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ShadowSt4lker7

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Burningeagle_12

The story so far is good we are just at the end of the second part of the story really wish we could have gotten a pic of the mech or suit in the deal but hey oh what are you going to do, but the reason why I'm giving this 5 stars is THERE'S BEARLY ANY STORY FOR MOBUSEKA AND THE HIDDEN DUNGEON!!! I mean when you search any of these titles it's like trying to find a needle in a haystack.

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NotsofasT

Really Good. But some people spamming it as a bad story. And giving one star and other mean things. I wish the author to don't drop this fic.

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tottles

In summary, the quality of writing and grammar in a novel directly impacts its readability, coherence, and the overall enjoyment of the reader. Authors who neglect these fundamental aspects risk producing a work that fails to resonate with its audience and may be considered "bad" due to its inability to effectively convey its intended story and themes. jdtsr

Please continue the story I enjoy it and it would make me sad if you stop making more chapter for this story plz don't stop and thank you for making this

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exodiusss

In summary, the quality of writing and grammar in a novel directly impacts its readability, coherence, and the overall enjoyment of the reader. Authors who neglect these fundamental aspects risk producing a work that fails to resonate with its audience and may be considered "bad" due to its inability to effectively convey its intended story and themes. acsv

In summary, the quality of writing and grammar in a novel directly impacts its readability, coherence, and the overall enjoyment of the reader. Authors who neglect these fundamental aspects risk producing a work that fails to resonate with its audience and may be considered "bad" due to its inability to effectively convey its intended story and themes. hrteqyrnarb