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A Gamer who transmigrated to another world which lead him to the new adventure which he never dream and imagine
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Schreiben Sie eine Rezensionthis book remind me of something I'd find on wattpad. shit writing, crappy plot, I hope the author well on his journey to becoming a better writer but this.......this is trash😅😅😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
world view is too small i can not think future or story's expectation is all ways wait and see but i do not like that i feel claustrophobic.
Grammer needs work but I like😃😃[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] the story so😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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this is an oki story if yu like a poor story written w lousy grammar that's all over the place i payed 2 fast passes just 2 read some more of the same take my advice if yu start to read this stick with the 57 free chapters then dump it not worth any fast passes at all i def wont continue 2 read it now that they charge for it
Jesus this is bad, the grammar and bad writing from the author make it downright unreadable. It's about the writing quality is something off Wattpad or an eight-year-olds dream journal.
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Spoiler enthüllenvery hard to read, all the bad gramma makes it hard to read, please get an editor, I would rather read machine translated novels then your work man, please fix the grammar
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Horrible writing. It's like a five year old writing a story. The author has no skill to write at all. And the grammer is very bad not readable at all. And very random in the plot of the story, which gives a very illogical and confusing story development.