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When a ROB decides to give little Jon Snow a small blessing , this small change completely changed the song of ice and fire
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Hello there, Lucifer101. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
Muito bom eu sou um leitor antigo de Got e tenho que dizer que essa fanfic tem muito futuro e pra ser uma das melhores e chegar a top 10 só é vc continuar assim sucesso vou tá acompanhando agora.
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Spoiler enthüllenIt is a good read and for now feels fast paced. And like any other fanfic there will be some plot holes but I am crossing my fingers for a good story. The death of the mountain was kinda anti climactic I know, so I can only deduce that the story will, 1. Either be Finished fast or in fast paced or 2. The story will drag on to battle of gods which will be disappointing for a SOIAF fanfic. other than that the character development for the first 14 chapters wasn't much and the author kind of skipped the [status] thing after the first chapter which is weird. Sigh. The author also showed Rhollor the lord of light depicted as a dragon (well i ask for forgiveness if i am wrong here) Hope the story progresses to be interesting and see how he will make the dragons meet. So good luck to you author and bless you.
Spoiler enthüllenvery good work with a good flow in the story . exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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Spoiler enthüllenSo I didn't read it because as soon as I read jon snow I lost interest but if he was a person rencarnated into jon snow I would have been interested.
King from the north. King from the north. King from the north. King from the north. King from the north. King from the north.King from the north. Chills
I binged the story. So good. I hope jon kills them fast and doesn't ally with tyrells. I binged the story. So good. I hope jon kills them fast and doesn't ally with tyrells.
I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] 8d
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i like the story and continue the story don't stop the story.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Autor Lucifer101
Writing Quality 2/5 Stars So many grammar and spelling errors! But, it's still somewhat readable. Stability of Updates 5/5 Stars At least one chapter per day Story Development 2/5 Stars This fanfic doesn't read like a story. It reads like a summary of events, with just the bare minimum (misspelled) dialogue. Sometimes the author doesn't even summarize events, and just throws random people/things into the story without any explanation. Character Design 1/5 Stars The MC is very one dimensional. We don't really know how he reacts in certain situations because, like I said before, we the readers only get a summary of events, as opposed to the events being narrated as they happen. What little depth we do get on the MC's character makes little sense. The MC is just supposed to be regular Jon Snow. Not a reincarnated or transmigrated individual in Snow's body. Just Jon Snow. Yet he acts like, and has the morals of, a person from modern earth. World Background 3/5 Stars Many fanfic authors just use GRRM's series as is, and don't try to make any personal mark on the world of A Song of Ice and Fire. This author tries to make his/her own mark. It didn't turn out well, but it's the effort that counts ** Please also note that (at the time of posting this review) half of the 5 star reviews submitted here are repeats by the same three users (bots?). So, please take the high rating of this story with a grain of salt.