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The feathered sky

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Autor: Daoist97tfu

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"Mother...?"
"Mother !"

"Run my child. "
"No mother. I will never leave you -"
"Go but never forget the most important thing,"
"What is it ?"
"Y -"
She was cut short by a loud BOOM. Her daughter took of at a tremendous speed.
Once her daughter was out of hearing range....
" It is your past my child."

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DyaAran
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It's Great! The writing quality is awesome. There were no flaws as far as I read. The story is developed in a way that could immediately grab the attention of the readers. It's full of suspense and will induce you to read more. The character design and the world background are yet to develop but I can say that there are going to be a world and characters full of imagination and creativity. I liked the chapter length. It was a bit short compared to the other novels I've read so far but it kept me at the edge of the seat. Every sentence was interesting. The author had written what is needed and I believe it worked out! Keep up the good work author! I wish you the best of luck!

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