/ Fantasy / The Demon System[twice as evil].
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Zusammenfassung
Over the years, so many tales have been told, about the great dragon that was cast down to the earth along with his bloodlust demons. It was said that demons took charge and dominated the earth for centuries; these were the darkest ages in the history of humanity.
Men tried all they could to fight off these destructive creatures from the planet, but all their efforts were worth next to nothing.
These vicious creatures always gained the upper hand, because of their higher intelligence, their super advanced technologies, and mostly, their numerous supernatural abilities, which were beyond human comprehension.
Just when all hopes were lost, certain beings, who called themselves, the Celestials, came to the rescue. These beings proved to be more powerful than the Demons. They outpowered the great Satan and his demons and drove them out of the earth.
The defiant ruler of the Demons refused to back down. He threatened that the battle had just begun, and soon enough he would reclaim his throne as ruler of the earth. Because of this, the Celestials absorbed as many demon abilities as they could, from the Demon, and reserved them in six books called the mother books so that men could acquire them easily, and be ever ready for the great and terrible return of the Devil, Lucifer. Though some say there was a seventh book whose power remained inaccessible by men, therefore getting lost in history till the arrival of the chosen one.
This is a story about a strange lad, abandoned and despised by many just because of his inherent odd personality.
After the terrible death of both parents, which occurred in just a day, Oliver was forced by fate to lead the life of an orphan, all by himself in a vast world of unparalleled technology. Not accustomed at all to a life without a parent, he had to survive on his own in the Catholic orphanage in South Dakota.
Here in this new world, the young lad decided to forge for himself, a new identity, but It wasn't long before the orphanage decided to check out the history of the new intake. They found out several vile kinds of stuff connected to him, including the possible reason why he was expelled from his former school.
Four years later, Oliver found himself in a secret government institute, where he would be trained to harness some strange abilities he never knew he had.
Read devotedly to know what the future holds for young Oliver; his journey in discovering his abilities, and how he finds destiny.
[ALERT ALERT > LOADING SYSTEM]
“what the hell?” muttered Oliver in confusion, as a strange screen obstructed his vision from nowhere.
[LOADING°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°]
“What in the... No stop, stop loading, I don't want this!” he yelled, his voice edging with dread.
[SYSTEM LOADED SUCCESSFULLY]
“What is happening to me, am I losing my mind?”
[COMPLETE THE FOLLOWING QUESTS, OR SUFFER A TERRIBLE MISFORTUNE]
Oliver slumped to the ground and passed out.
Okay, guys, I made a massive change in the book. though it's almost the same as the first one, you might find some changes in the gender of most characters, mainly the MC.
This is my first system novel. I know it isn't so perfect, but each day I work towards perfection, so please support me with your time and attention as I do my best to load more chapters.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionThe plot is intriguing and I am kind of interested in where it will lead. There are a few errors that need to be fixed however it's great. You have the potential and do continue to write more. 👌👌👌✌✌✌
Thank you all for your remarks and comments.pls keep following up,add to library,a leave a review. I promise to be consistent in my updating. You can also leave chapter comments and paragraph comments. Stay tuned for more updates and more entertainment guys.
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Hi guys, I'm sorry if you noticed any error or confusion in MC's gender or age. the reason is because the book was formerly a female lead, and the initial age of MC was 10, but there's no need to be bothered, I'm currently working on making the corrections. please if you notice any further error or confusing content, do leave me a comment on the paragraph or at the end of the chapter.Thank you :-)
hay, isn't this another interesting novel from the same inspiring author. Right from the start I knew this would be a good story. I recommend this novel for ever great reader, and I assure you that you won't regret it
nice novel but I don't like how you make me wait for updates too long😅 I'm getting way too addicted. hope the author continues to give us more, can't wait.
The plot is interesting and it will get you hooked and there is a lot of potential and it got me hooked I will continue waiting for upcoming chapters but there errors which really confuse me.
So far this story is great! I wish there was more! Hopefully the author will update more 😊 anyway there were a few grammatical mistakes you should check out btw.
i read survival of the survivors and reading this one....i kinda like this one better...though i like this one better the survival of the survivors is good and got more potential
I absolutely love the imagery, you are able to paint an incredible picture of your characters and their surroundings! Your writing style and tone is so engaging. This is excellent work so far and I can't wait to see what's to come next!
Wow, this Sci-fi piece makes Me wonder what more our imaginations can offer. it feels Unlimited, its a mastery of writing.
Hi, a little feedback while I’m dropping the novel after chapter 15. There are repetitive breaks of tense, and confusions in the pronouns of the MC. Those are not prohibitive but the novel might benefit from correcting these.I was coming with expectations about the genre of the novel. First chapter feels optionnal, second chapter would have made a better start right into action. Then we are immersed in the usual school life but still no sign of systems. World is built around the disappearance of demons, with angels. Suddenly they’re taught about space warriors and aliens. I believe you’ll introduce the system soon after but it’s too late for me and the mix of genres is a little bit too much for my obtuse mind. I believe mentioning just fragments of these elements in chapter 2 and 3 would have smoothen things up. Hope that feedback will help you in future works. Good luck and perseverance!
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