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The Deity

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Autor: The_FBI_god

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Zusammenfassung

The Deity is about two souls becoming one. A human and a young deity intertwining to become the best version of itself.

Follow their humble adventure, as they seek to grow their religion and bring prosperity to all those who respect and worship them.

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  1. Pepinillo
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  2. The_FBI_god
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  3. christopher_Ekwu_5767

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Rank -- Power- Rangliste
Stone -- Power- Stein

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The_FBI_god

What kind of author doesn’t give their story five stars? On a more serious note, this story will be slow paced and slowly released, I already have another story I’m working on (Reincarnated as a god of water), but that means I already know how to write. So there won’t be any big writing errors in my text. I hope you give the story a try, you probably won’t regret it. :)

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Lemonbunzz

This is much better than your previous novel, reincarnated as the god of water, at least in its early chapters (I haven't finished read the latest chapter since the novel is so messed up). Also I hope you write more novels with more god protagonist, I will be guaranteed a loyal supporter 😂. How about a story where gods and human coexist together instead of gods acting you know.. gods. Leaning more towards slice of life here.

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Daoisty9pBel

loving this keep up the good work and I'll keep stoning you 🙂😁

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Pepinillo

Me gusta mucho :D Kdndkkdmdmmdmfmfmfmfmmfmfmxmfmmdmdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmmdmdmdmsmmsmsmsmsmmsmsmsmsmsmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdmmdmddffed

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christopher_Ekwu_5767

I love the book would like it more if there was more chapters

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StoryteIIer

Well Done! Very good concept, I see a lot of potential for growth. You might also want to sneak in the levels of strength (like maybe when the mage tells Jasmine, and Jasmine tells Jantyr about the levels of strength). I also highly suggest you use a writing assistant (like Grammarly, as memey as it sounds. If Grammarly doesn't work on webnovel, first write your text in a google document, and let Grammarly do the edits). Overall, very well done!

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