The Conquerors bloodline

LV 3

AllFiction

654/5000 I read until chapter 62 so I can give my review heh ~ Well, it is strange to see the Author calling the Protagonist a 'Dominator of Women', while he who is the Master of the situation ... He doesn't have a voice in any of their actions, he doesn't get mad at the Girls, even if they torture him, do **** to him and etc, much less have any characteristics of a Dominator It would be easier to call it 'The Beta of Women' instead of 'Dominator of Women', is the author tip! The rest of the story itself is good, but unfortunately that aforemention spoils the story a lot ... Well, as I have nothing else to read, so I will have to continue with this here.

LV 4

ProfessorNoob

Gigolo Mc and a useless system. Mc is weak and does not train. The author just replaced tatsumi with the Mc and follows the original plot. If you like r-18 read this crap. Basically a hentai for akame ga kill.

LV 5

Yuri_is_Ntr

I keep it as brief as possible. Parc is just a conviniet tool for things to happen and pоrn to make. He contradict himself constantly, he's impact on character and story kept to minimum and he doesn't have opinion of his own. Well, stantard conviniet character for a story, it's really incredible how easy going he could be. For plot well, it's disappointing. I think author was trying to do something better than pwp story, but then throw it all and rushed story. Eh, understandable. Pоrn is actually good, a lot of different scenes and kinks. Fair warning, bdsm and all girls lesbian come in complect. If you don't like, don't read it. In the end. It's a nice pwp story with a lot of frustrating things.

LV 6

EnderPL

Read 8 chapters and I can’t anymore! The author asked to read 10 but it’s so painful 😖. I could see reviews after 5 chapters so I think he will not delete it. Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5*. Writing quality is good not a lot of mistakes 4*. Story development WTF? You just get nothing, no target, no explanation , just read like you started in the middle of the novel. Basically you can read the manga or watch anime (only difference there is no sex there). Character design. Can’t even say that there is one or something special about them. Mc is basically a worthless idiot that can only fuk and contradicts himself. Example: He is so angry that they can not help his saviors and need to devise a plan fast (even to the point of arguing with general). But in the middle of thinking about the plan he had time to fuk his kitty and take a 💤. It doesn’t matter that thanks to this one of his saviors died and the other lost a leg. Hahah the beta Mc in the story can only fuk. The other characters are the same like in the original. Copy/paste (except sex) so the author didn’t do anything new. World background. Nothing new as well, the same as in the original. Overall you can read as the writing quality is ok but if you’re looking for a fresh and nice novel I would not advise.

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

Dejo estos nombres de varios animes que son buenos candidatos para el harén: -en contra de los dioses (https://ni-tian-xie-shen-against-the-gods.fandom.com/es/wiki/Categor%C3 % ADa: Mujer). -tales de demonios y dioses (https://tales-of-demons-and-gods.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ye_Ziyun). - "· golpear la sangre ·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - · Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha · = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). -arifureta shokugyou de sekai saikyou (https://arifureta.fandom.com/wiki/Yue). - Fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki y mikoto uchiha, (https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - una pieza = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampiro = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda', (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka, saya, (https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei" = (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "· TO LOVE RU ·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke), (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). - "· Date a live ·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). - · Trinity Seven · = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). - · Estratos infinitos · = (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). - · Sword Art Online · = (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). - · Campione! · = (Https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). - · Dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou ka · = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). - "· Sekirey ·" = (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). - · Seirei tsukai sin espada de baile · = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -maken ki. -rimuru tenpesta - (https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc

LV 3

SecretWolf

I read the first arc - Akama ga kill and finished 115ish Well based on initial comments section browse, I was not really encouraged to continue on, but I did and I am not disappointed. I personally Hate Beta MCs, but contrary to the comments saying he was one, it was not true. The MC is not OP but definitely not a Beta passive MC. The MC's character is one that you would expect of harem seeking protagonist. (actually seeking them and not waiting for them show up.) - The plot is not something completely new with different missions but a revised version of them making them different enough to be enjoyable. The plot is a big positive. (However, the ending was rushed, authors seemed excited to get to next thing, it is still good just lower quality compared to the previous chapters) - A major problem with most fanfic is that the Hero (Plus other characters) of the main story is worshipped by the ff authors and everything they touched, powers (also women), the fanfic hero leaves them be and considers it immoral to change. Fortunately, you don't see much of that. Tatsumi does not get to join them, making the story interesting. (Authors still gives him the leftover (not liked) girl and good ending, as a sort of compensation, but meh, it was not a loss for MC so IDC, similarly Wave is compensated) -( *venting - I do not understand fanfics which author changes everything but scared to break up a couple. (doming the world ok but not taking someone's woman) yet they go for (R-18, harem seeking MC)) Good thing the author used his right (power) to make harem targets not end up with cannon partners and actually used his 'author-powers' to not make them be together in the first place. (It is understandable that authors avoid stealing other's women, but how it was done here is a perfect loophole that should be utilized much more, if MC is harem-seeking, and getting best FLs) My only issue was towards the end the plot was sacrificed and some areas concentrated on R-18 variation affecting the plot. (Chelsea's Yuri action was forced, while it would have been better if MC actually build a better relationship with her during the chapters of her 'lust'. Chelsea's lust was not executed right. Why was she even there as a maid? Cat Form is a better disguise.) All I can say is that for Akama ga Kill FF this really good, there is a plot close enough to make you part of the same world and different enough to not make you bored. Lots of R-18 content. I will also put my review of the next word in the reply section after reading it.

LV 3

Woswa1d

This " cultural reference guide" has been enjoyable so far. I will be sure to tune in for future chapters. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 5

Lucifer7030

Just read first 5 chapters but i can see this fanfic being great if the writing style becomes a little more refined hoping to see a lot more of it!!

LV 13

ThriceRecklessSong

I am currently at Chapter 119, finishing the first arc of this novel. I like this novel very much but it has some problems. I expected everything that I would want in a fanfic smut novel but then some plot happens. The beginning of this novel is quite nonsensical, without any idea who the MC is aside from what is read in the synopsis. Wasn't much of a problem since it is a smut novel, then the MC started talking about himself and his sad backstory straight out of basic revenge fap novels. Not good, but I can live with it. Other than the fact that he rehashes the same thing to other people to earn sympathy but hey, it's a smut novel. And then more background story for the MC. He is a hybrid half-demon, half-angel, pretty cool but then he has knowledge of AgK so modern fantasy? But the world still has "nobles" that look down on others because culture. The country MC lives in is clearly barbaric with a custom of "dewing" someone, which actually isn't needed since MC's mother got her wings torn off by someone with their bare hands. From how MC's mother's family is presented, they are a strong warrior race but can easily be put down by commoners, his mother anyways. Aside from that, the country he lives in got invaded and conquered, even thought MC said all countries have nukes, I mean what? His mother gets turned to a slave(modern world, much wow) when they fled to another country but his aunts did not. Stacking bad stuff happening to MC doesn't really make me sympathize with him and the original world MC lives in seems to be much more shitty compared to AgK. A small note that everyone in his old country hates him because he is a bad omen, but has been adopted by his old neighbors that wasn't there at the beginning, like what? Also, him being a hybrid makes him weak when genetics and evolution would beg to differ. If author wants to keep this weird backstory, he should make a small prologue arc. Flesh out MC's homeworld more to make sense of whatever small tidbits he wanted to explain cause it seems to me he just smacked together 2 worlds. And then we come the our MC, Parc Evans. Author said you can skip the first arc since you would not miss anything important and with all the weird backstory MC has, AkG arc being close to a copypasted story changing Tatsumi to Parc, it is better to skip some parts. MC is completely Beta in this first arc. He is not a "Conqueror" by any means and is closer to an Incubus or a Lust Demon. His smell does most of the Conquering for him, while his actions shows a variety of Beta spinelessness. Now, I do like reading the various hijinks that this led to, but it is not in line with both the synopsis and title of this novel. Author noted that MC is suppose to be a tamer but is always shown to be fighting rather than letting his women do the work for him. Author said he should improve in this point in the next arc so we shall see. Finally, the smuts scenes are great, but have fallen in quality in the last couple of chapters nearing the end of the arc. Anything after the reunion with Night Raid was quite meh. In general, the length of the smut scenes have around 70-90% foreplay before the actual act itself. I hope author gives more time to the actual act. All in all, a good smut novel that can be improve more. We shall see what the future of this one holds. tl;dr A very good smut novel with a weird and inconsistent backstory for the MC that author says is Alpha but acts like a Beta. Also, lots of foreplay and BJ scenes and less of actual ***.

LV 4

Rorschach22

I'm going to be blunt and say that since I'm a man of culture one of the main reasons I'm liking this story so much is because the s.mut is quite s.exy and differentiated and that the plot isn't idi.otic like in many of the other stories of this genre but really engaging. This novel is amazing and a must read and I'm enjoying even the pacing of the story. The author himself is starting to wonder if the s.ex scenes are too numerous but in my opinion the problem isn't the number because if you think about it how many scenes did each girl get? Not that many and often enough in the scene there are multiple girl; no, the problem is the number of the girls and I'm scared that the more this story goes on the more is gonna resemble a sort of Pokémon with people. Let me try to explain my point talking about the girls of the first world: Esdeath and kurome are the best girls with more plot and screen time than everybody else, leone and najenda fit nicely in the story because leone is the perfect first girl being more animalistic in nature and is also perfect for starting an harem since that is the way of a lion pride while najenda is the perfect last girl since she is so driven to complete her objective that she put her emotions and everything else in second place. Akane and Chelsea are simply needed in the story because the chapters when kurome try to talk them into becoming one of her master's pets are a masterpiece that must be transformed into a holy book so that we can indoctrin ...Cough... Teach other people of false faith. All the others girls aren't especially needed in the harem in my opinion and I know this is gonna sound crazy but in an harem story is possibile to have females characters and not have them join the harem, REVOLUTIONARY! You have sniper girl and scissor girl that don't bring anything exceptional to the table apart for being a tsundere and an airhead respectively, I'm personally fed up with the first type in general while the chapters wasted on the second character talking about and healing from a trauma born from a 1 cm scar on the cheek in a world where humans are treated worse than cattle is so mor.onic that I think those chapters are the only ones that completely broke my immersion in the story. The wounded sisters and sayo are good characters (do we really need 3 copies of the same character? Isn't sayo enough?) because they allow the story to show that the MC isn't a psychopath but somebody that is fighting to overcome his childhood trauma and that he is ready to help others in a similar situation to at least start their own recovery but then becoming a harem member isn't a necessity, she could go back home to her village, maybe even togheter with her childhood friend if their friendship can survive their misadventures or even help the angel boy from esdeath's group to set up a less corrupt government since being a pleb that suffered heavily at the hands of the old nobility and a "member" of night raid she should easily become the voice of the people or even something else. Since we are talking about it I think you could have written a good couple of chapters about Parc having a nightmare after seeing someone else experiencing something similar to his trauma and then having najenda take care of him like he has done for the girls. I'm not a writer but maybe having the MC shows some big vulnerability at least once would make him more relatable to the readers and then with the help of najenda parc would strengthen his resolve to overcome every obstacles in his way just like the general. Anyway back to the girls and ahhh, If only there were some useless characters with relative s.ex scenes that are so irrelevant to the story that we could reincarnate them in another story and this novel will not suffer one bit... Oh wait there are the 2 rashaka girls. Joking aside these 2 don't add anything meaningful to the story and apart from the scene where they were stuck under the table while Esdeath and parc talked which was really funny their absence wouldn't be felt. Obviously those are my personal opinions on them but I think that at this point they are already starting to be numerous considering that it is only the first world and then the second world starts and the problem is going to grow even bigger since in this one there are going to be a lot of new members, like 30 or something . Don't take me wrong summer seems like a great character and you are doing an amazing work in writing the evolution of her relationship with parc but you must understand that we readers (maybe I'm the only one but I'm pretty confident that I can speak for a lot of people) are already attached to some of the previous characters and you are asking us to forget them because they are currently frozen in some magic evocation system and instead read about 50 new girls and start caring about them. I'm hoping to be proven wrong but if this keep going by the last world I see this ending with a lot of hollow characters that have been in the story for only 3 chapters each and an MC that will have to act like an asshole since he can't spend time with everybody .... And let's just pretend that the parc who said all those things about being a responsabile father and the parc who is currently kepping the woman pregnant with his child frozen so that she could not deliver him/her child to the world are two different MCs ok? Last thing, instead of skipping terrarium you should have written about it, some adventure with the girls from the first world, maybe fight to clear a piece of land from the monsters and build an house so that when he moves to the second world instead of having the girls being frozen in a pokeball you could have said that the girls are living there in your private world. P.S. I know that I have written mostly about things I don't like in the story but that's because I'm really enjoying it and I want to see it improve. English is not my first language, (you probably already know from all my mistakes) and I spent most of my lunchbreak typing on a century old phone with the autocorrector set in another language this shi.tty wall of text that maybe the author is never gonna read, this is just to make you understand how much I'm interested in this story

LV 12

Silent_Moon

It's a heavy-themed story but still good and very useful in numbing myself for heavy stories, at least not netorare stuff, which I don't ever want to come across anywhere.

LV 12

John_sins1

So far it’s really promising, the Mc is not a beta and isn’t afraid of using his strength or other advantages he has to survive which is much better than the hiding powers trope that’s so common in novels.

LV 4

daoist832572

Very nice novel An essential in any library of feelings at the height of the greatest. A book with a large central die-cut especially if we want to address the understanding of emotions and feelings.

LV 4

Demonic_Mori_Jin

Ok WTH bro. I love this novel but im over 100 chaps in and and I'm just now writing a review but here u go👏 I look forward to this novel and love it overall but my only issue so far is that i feel Parc should have..... red eyes... thats all.😔😑

LV 10

nightRox

Really enjoying this so far. MC isn't too overpowered in strength. He has a interesting background, r18 scenes are good as well. Also like the fact that the author didn't relate back to the original, like make comparisons and stuff. MC seems to have good combat skills as well. Also, really like the interactions between characters like Esdeath and the Night Raid after he 'tames' both of them.

LV 4

MoeJojoJoe

Damn! This fanfic is really good.💯👏👍 I really didn't expect this. I never thought it is an akame ga kill fanfic based on the cover. I really like how the past of the mc is only slowly revealed in the story than revealing it all in the start like most fanfic. I also like how the author preserve his originality without changing all the plot. I kinda hate it when other authors mess up the original plot rather than making their own original story. Great Work Author-san!🥇🙏🙇💯 I'm expecting more from you.😁👍

LV 4

Daemon009

It is very hard to read author uses tough words and is trying to make mc look mysterious but it just makes it even mire to read character development and background is not much good either

LV 15

tommurphy

I like the story seems really thought out but after so many sex scenes I kinda wish you gloss over some for more plot not that it's really a complaint because they are really good just kinda hope for more development in the story sometimes

LV 4

GreedAF

it's one of the few good multiverse fanfiction i found, most don't have anything specific or their grammar is **** but this one is like a diamond. Thanks for your hard work.

LV 14

ProfessorofCulture

Just make the protagonist stronger 😭😭😭😭, well apart from that I love the book. The sex scenes are so perfect 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍