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Kapitel 1: kuoh

Hell

this word is the only thing this land can be called

there are milions of dead bodies of both human and inhuman entities lay dead on this cursed land

some of them are normal sized humans even if they arent human or fully human in the first place

using humans as mesurament we can see the sheer size of the creatures some have the mass of 7 fat humans

others cant even be mesured by human size as they are beings of the size of mountains and oceans

they are diferent some of them have wings both from leather or feathers from all collors possible

some have animal features on their bodies most of them are buff and huge probably phisical figthers

the monumental sized ones are not that commom but are more strange

as some of them have fully scaled bodies like dragons but have human shaped forms

some of them look like fantasy creatures like dragons or phoenix or other simple monsters

or even rarer some of them have strange bodies with shapes like an amalgamention of limbs bones and flesh

they are so unbelivable strange that even the bravest warriors that are the symbol of the brave can only cry in fear and disgust in the sigth of these creatures

but all of those creatures have on thing in common

all of them are heavelly damaged as blood of various collors soak the ground in this barren and deserted land that feals like a burn florest

the land is destroyed with heavely burns and destroyed land

the black sun rised up in the blood red sky leaving an end times atmosfere in this cursed land

the land isnt strange enougth as something white is faling from the sky covering the land and the corpses on a layer of white matter

there is also an white mist that obscure the horizon but we can see giant outlines probably more of the monumental creatures but they are getting bigger as we reach the center of the wasteland

after walking for hours as the way to the center isnt short

we can see a huge destroyed city that seam to be recently destroyed considering the fire and the scent of newly burn flesh and blood

as our perspective enters the city we can see that the houses and buildings are destroyed as corpses that are torn in pieces are on the ground but all of them are human or demi humans

the streats are destroyed with various holes and burn and frozzen? land

there are weapons and corpses everywhere on the streats either torn to pieces or killed in some strange way

then after aventuring on this city we reach the center of the city which is a circle area that has a huge size to be able to house so much bodies as on the center of the circle we can see two people alive

one of them is a man that is somewhat tall

wearing an old military uniform of a higher up like that of a commander

his messy and short black hair is hidden by a black military hat giving the fealing together with his clotes of a dominering general

he is "wearing" a black coat with golden details he is wearing this like the way whitebeard wore in marineford war

his hands are covered with black leather gloves that are tainted with blood no his entire outfit is covered with blood of various collors

his hands are holding an old man's neck

the old man is injured his legs are twisted like they were caugth in some sort of vortex

his knees are broken as the bone is somewhat going on the oposite direction

he doesnt have his two arm one that is bleading and the other was burned to stop bleding

his chest is full of holes and bruises

but despise all of that he is full of life looking at the face of the military man with hatred and fear

"cant you just kill me alredy" the old man says in an strange tone as his vocal cords are a bit damaged

the young military man looked at the old man with his cold red eyes that seam to be a blood pond and just says

"[KILLER RECORD: 6th CHAPTER TORTURE]"

as a red aura apears around his gloved hands as the old man began to scream albeit a bit strange considering the state of his vocal cords the old man body began convulsing as his eyes began to lose all ligth and soon enougth his body stoped convulsed as his eyes became lifeless

the man droped the oldman as he looked at the blood red sky with an cold face

he pushes his hat down covering his red eyes and moves to leave the city only to blood red eyes open on the sky as the man looked at the strange fenomena with a raised eyebrow

soon the city ground began to tremble as a abyss like fissure opened on top of him as it sucked the man into it

as soon as the man was sucked into the portal the eyes on the sky closed and the fissure in the space closed itself leaving only an destroyed city and the wasteland full of bodies of almost all abitants of the world


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