Zusammenfassung
Klaus died young without being able to do what he wanted to, to have a large family. This was his wish from childhood growing up in an orphanage.
He got a new chance to be able to fulfill that wish. For able to fulfill the wish he had to go through a lot of trials.
Will he be able to survive long enough to fulfill his wish or not?
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erhalten Wรถchentlicher Energiestatus
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Hello! Is there any kind of yuri? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. Thanks!
I made it to chapter 6 before the terrible grammar completely destroyed my eyes. Author, please use grammarly. It's free, and your novel will absolutely be better for it.
so far story is great but I hope u make mc more confident as he has will of pride and make him brave enough to be outgoing enough and not worry about plot shield for protagonist and other stereotypes
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The writing quality is good, but the story devlopment is snail paced, which is not expected from a system novel. The mc is not even using the sins properly. I hope it gets better.
The story's plot and character is nice. I like everything that's going on in the book. Nice Job๐. Please check out my book. I am an author and I write a book called "The Dragon Prince: Evolution of The Dragon Era". It's nice, and trust me it's worth reading.
The idea is great, but the execution leaves much to be desired. Many of the chapters I read almost read as background notes for the story. it
story so is so out of place. pov changes is bad. the pace is fast but the story development is snail pace. interactions is too boring.
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