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An adult dies and is reincarnated in the body of a child with a system with the possibility of creating an overpowering country. Thinking he's on another world, what happens when he finds out he's still on Earth?
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionHi, I'm the author! Just to tell you that the story at the beginning will be taken quite lightly by the MC, but following the events in history and training, the MC will become more and more serious until it becomes completely cold. So you will see his transformation from a happy person to someone cold, ruthless and unscrupulous!
I love this and overall the author is improving while writing. The novel starts with poor grammar but by chapter 8 it’s actually pretty good. Overall this book is great and is just getting better.
For now, good enough, more please so that we can rate your Novel as it should! Don't give up on novel please and keep posting new simpa and interesting chapter! I think the story should be a little more serious but we'll see what happens next!
This story is pretty cool! Keep up the good work and be sure to reread before publishing, there is some grammar here and there. But the story could be better though, everything being black could also be mind-boggling.
I've been searching this kind of novel. a sci-fi, kingdom building and technological gap genre novel. this kind of novel is very rare for me. Author-sama please don't drop this novel.👍🏻
It is a good story, I feel that it lacks a bit of realism, something like the reaction of the MC to reach a new world and in all the situation that was, but it is a pleasant story in general.
It has potential, although I think you should go slower to develop the story better, since it feels like everything happens too fast, still great job
Spoiler enthüllenThis is good but need more chapter and don't drop It after ch 50 will back and see will be 5 or will be 5 buc i khow its godd story keep going
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I would hate for this magnificent story to go to waste so if you find the time, please update the story, it's a beautiful book and I absolutely love it, I hope you update it sometime soon.
I love it and it's one of the best webnovel I've read so far I hope you don't drop this it's really great and I hope more people read this cause it's absolutely great 👍
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I like the style its fun read some parts seemed bit fast paced but they have fitted into story as whole so far keep up good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ive been trying to find a modern Kingdom Building novel for so long. i had found a different one before but it was discontinued but the fact that this a system novel too makes it even better
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