Zusammenfassung
Imagine a world where humanity has the capability of having powers to themselves, Aiden's best friend Leo has the most overpowered power yet to exist in this world but one thing is certain to himself and that something else is even more powerful than him. The creator of his own power.
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The first chapter caught my attention. The premise is interesting. It has great potential. I liked the development of Leo's powers. My criticism is that chapter 2 is too long, I think the author should break it down, turning it into several chapters.
Kinda regret I read it early. It has great potential, and the concept is my cup of tea. It's great overall. I can't wait for next chapter! Good luck.
I really love the plot, the names be cracking me up like "nylon"😭😭😭. his parents did him dirty giving him that name tho. the book is overall lovely.
The story is so good and promising-looking for more to come and the plot is really interesting and I can't wait for the new chapter thank you
Great plot great writing the author wr smoothly Great plot great writing the author wr smoothly Great plot great writing the author wr smoothly Great plot great writing the author wr smoothly
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
the whole story just flow naturally to the point even the author present it in a 1st pov you can still get a vivid mage of the other characters inside your head absolute writing style. for those who read this comment don't hesitate to try the book you will not regret it, promise!
This novel is so unique and interesting. It's great overall and not to mention it's so fun. This novel has so much potential and I can't wait to see what the author does with it.
The Sypnosis alone captivates me into reading the novel and I have to say it's been quite a fun ride, only issue is the length of the chapter 2 and dialogues, everything else 10/10❤️
Hello author! Good writing skills! I have read this book and it is very different And unique concept to the other novels I have read about fiction. This can surely hold readers interest. here are some of my suggestions That I like to recommend So your book can be more appealing ; -you can use Grammarly For improving your writing.(webnovel also suggest you to use that!) -And upload Your content daily.(as you are doing and send it on diffrent platforms for promotion to attract more reader base) That ‘s it. I hope you can take into account my suggestions regarding your work. Here is my 5 stars not only for your plot but also for your courage to write. As an author I also know it’s Hard to take first steps so I wish you to be a successful Writer. Keep it up!