Tensura: Supreme Kitsune

LV 2

Kaniion

The comedy here isn't really my style, and it breaks the fourth wall a lot, which takes away the immersion of the story a little, but I don't think this story deserves only one star, at least apart from the negative points that I mentioned, it's an average story.

LV 14

Sorouko

It super confusing at times, I don’t know what’s what, yet I can still somehow follow along. There’s way to much fourth walls breaks too, it makes it even more confusing. The story itself if properly edited would be a decent story. Also I know that it’s a self insert by the author but you don’t have to keep saying it, it ruins the flow to readers. Good luck with you story!

LV 4

Jhuniee

Good More Chapter Please 🙏✨ .......... .

LV 4

Jester_Advocate

a very good novel/fanfiction but some mistake of grammar here and there but it's good enough that I still understand it ███╗░░░███╗░█████╗░████████╗████████╗██╗░░██╗███████╗░██╗░░░░░░░██╗  ███████╗██╗░░░██╗░█████╗░██╗░░██╗  ██╗░░░██╗████╗░████║██╔══██╗╚══██╔══╝╚══██╔══╝██║░░██║██╔════╝░██║░░██╗░░██║  ██╔════╝██║░░░██║█

LV 4

Knight_Riku

I am not the best Authir out there but I am certainly not the worst. An Author strives for improvement based on the readers evaluation of their published work and their fair criticism. I am no different. I am simply one of tens of thousands of Authora that write solely to give all of you this content. Each one is unique. Each Is different. My story is different and I hope that it pleases you. If not then oh well. I simply was not able to get your attention and loyalties in reading this fic. My story is not even 5% done and I'm already getting haters in here. If you don't like it then say what is wrong with it. Don't be like Daoist who had reviewed on a fake account cause he is mad and an attention Seeker. An author has to take the time out if their busy lives to give you something to read. Please be considerate of both me and other Authors who might have a different life situation that they must deal with. Please be honest with this and give your own reviews that is fair and thoughtful of how you actually judge a work. Even if it is 1 star review that doesn't matter, review and answer fairly and not out if emotion like others have. Thank you and enjoy reading hopefully.

LV 4

VegetaIsBadass

Maybe the story is good, or maybe it's not. As a writer myself, I find this really bad. I don't know why others writers have not said this. But there can never be a story that succeeds without a synopsis. Like I said, I don't know if it's good or not, but I didn't read it because there's no synopsis. If you think I'm being petty, then I am.