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Talon Flintwolf the last Dragonborn of Tylingariea series
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In the beginning the Creator forged the Seed of the Multiverse Tree that over a unknown time grew into the very center of all multiverses whoms very core is the Nexus of All Things were if corrpted every Multiverse in existence acoss all timelines will be manuplited to the one who corrpted it.
The Creator created the world of Tylingariea and the First Ones who over a millionea became The Quinn and it was at this time Gods and Quinn intermingled creating kin with Divine abilities.
It was one such Divine of unknown origin and his name plunged the Multiverse into a Era of Darkness but was defeted by a divine that was born of Dracoverin blood and a mortal mother this was the first Dragonborn.
Who defeted the first of many incarnations of a powerful being who over the span of 5 thousand years each one thousand years a new Dragonborn being reborn with there destiny intertwined with each incarnation of the man defeated by the first Dragonborn.
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I really enjoy how you set the scene in some of the chapters, allowing us to get a refresher or update on the location or timeline. The character names are also very unique.
So the storyline seems pretty comprehensive and cohesive right frok the start. I liked how specific the descrsiptions were and plot progression is quite commendable. The only advice I’d give, is that the charcter names are too long and don’t roll off easy on the reading-mind. It’s not a big issue, but it can become an issue in the long run and cause hindrances for your readers. So, I would suggest you come up with nicknames or shortened versions of your characters names, just to provide easy assimilation for readers. Good job!
The story has a great world premise that I can see developing in some interesting ways. The characters are also creative, would just like them to be described more. I would also suggest finding a proofreader and editor maybe, some words are not what they should be and the overall layout could be changed to make the reading experience much more fluid.
This story is really interesting. I haven't read something with this setting before. If it developed more, it might create a uniqueness for the story. The author done a good job on character design. The writing need a little bit of touch, so it will come neat. It's still easy to understand atm, but I just feels it will be much more better to edit the typo and un-edit typing. Overall the story have a great starter, I hope it released more frequent. As this definitely would gain more attention. This genre are popular so there's a chance to gain more reader by releasing the chapter in schedule 🍀
The plot is interesting ! There are some grammar mistakes but your overall writing style is good .Love it !
This novel has great potential- it has an interesting and engaging concept, and the depth of narration pulls you in. There are errors in grammar and punctuation; I suggest that the author proofread and take their time to ensure a better flow of sentences. I'll keep an eye on this novel; I'm excited to see how it progresses, and I'm looking forward to future updates!
I have enjoyed every part of this book that the author has made. the world is unique and interesting filled with a compelling story and a unique narrative with that has anime inspired elements in it. As well as inspirations from Sci-Fi and fantasy movies and books. The world of Tylingariea is wholly unique and the author creates the lore and characters from his own imagination. The writing itself needs to be worked on because of some bad grammar, misuse of puncuoin and may need editing. but besides that I have enjoyed the book and hope to continue reading more from this writer in the future