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Succubus’s villain system across the multiverse (dropped)
4.8 (13 Bewertungen)
Zusammenfassung
A woman average like any other gained a system that could potentially destroy balance in the multiverse. Watch as even gods learn to fear the woman who in the future would come to be known as the succubus primogenitor.
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good chapter. -good progress, not so fast, not so slow, just waiting she for him to put his strength to work to advance rank xD. - of course also without forgetting to try the canon girls and goddesses (for better exp).
The author is really looking forward to it, I hope there will be pure Yuri, she does not want to do this with a man, an example where she can give them pleasure without touching personally just by the ability.
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The story has a lot of potential, but the grammar should be seriously improved upon. I can also see that you ran out of commas, so I'm giving you some of my spares. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Please put commas in
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A really great book, with original and interesting characters, it’s also connected to her other book which I also very much enjoy, I’m really looking forward to what comes next in story
Okay so I was looking for some non cliche Danmachi fanfics, because I was dissatisfied with Bell's character and plot development of anime, and trust me I browsed through a lot of fanfics, but probably only this one caught my attention. Despite me not being a fan of female mc (probably my the first time reading something with female mc haha), I enjoyed it so far. The writing quality is good, the main character has unique race and well fitting attribute & skills (i hate when authors just stack techniques). And most importantly, the plot progression IS NOT CLICHE. like whenever I open a fanfic, the mc gets some OP abilities from fate, dxd, onepiece and etc, and of course the mc joins Hestia and basically repeats the same plot that was in anime. Or maybe not Hestia, but you bet your ass its either Hestia or Heaphestus, I am so tired of this. 😂 And here I get an interesting fanfic with the mc joining Ishtar familia and even having love interest with Freya. Seriously, 90% of Danmachi fanfics ignore Freya and Ishtar. Its a big bruh moment for me, because I think they are the top 2 girls in whole Danmachi. anyway so far i really enjoyed the fanfics and even put the notifications to notify me about new releases. So keep up the good work author [img=recommend]
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Shameless author review cliche: You know the drill I hope you enjoy my side fanfic I may not update it as much as my other one but still I hope you enjoy.