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Bound in chains yet yearning for freedom, Alpheo, a modern historian, finds himself enslaved in a land on the brink of chaos.
As the empire of Rolmia plunges into civil war following the death of the emperor , his three ambitious sons vie for the throne. In the midst of this turmoil, Alpheo finds the chance to break his chain and escape, leading his companions into the ashes of war, trying to thrive in it, selling their swords to the highest bidder .
But beyond the borders of Rolmia, hungry eyes watch as the empire's grip loosens. The Sultanate of Azania, ever the opportunist, sees a chance to expand its domain and influence , while to the south, neighboring principalities breathe a sigh of relief as the once-dominant giant stumbles and falters.
In the sea, the confederation of the Free Isle finds their chance to restore their old maritime power , denied to them by an empire that is now crumbling beneath itself , lacking the strenght to stop them.
In this crucible of conflict, where dynasties crumble and empires fall, Alpheo find his call and the chance to forge his own destiny amidst the ashes of empires.
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overall is good but gonna stock more chapter to read this again anyway keep it up and goodluck
The story has potential, but the beginning "world building" chapters are almost unintelligible. The story keeps jumping to different characters and it ends up completely ruined due to that.
You are building the world background quite nicely. And I love how you are clear about the personality of the characters. And how you progress the story with a clear goal in mind
It was good at first and had good potential but in the end. It turns nothing more than cliché story with MC suddenly becoming this over the top confident and arrogant MC with "I don't give a shit about other" attitude. He also doesn't care the problems his friends points out just smiles being nonchalant about it. MC attitude doesn't feels very unearned and very obnoxious at this point. MC acting like he max out his character stats and just visiting the beginner town to do some quest there for the sake of nostalgia.
Very interesting story and a very fun read excited to see where mc goes, grammar can be way better I think if you went back and fixed up some chapters it’d make the read even better, love the world building lots of different people, the tribes, pirates, giants, and maybe even some others we have not seen yet. Mc is a very smart character no annoying females his wife seems very strong willed. The battles are very detailed and hype to read about love the war aspect of this story. Keep up the great work author 👍
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If you are a kid then this is not for you. A very good novel with expressive writing. A quality work 👏👏👏 unlike most novels found here.
It's like Game of Thrones and it's terrible... Terribly delicious! The book is great and the author of soldering stars thanks for it!-----------------------------------------------------------------
fantastic story with realistic world building and history, the most captivating part of the story is the well thought-out plot as through the multiple POV's we get a layered story of different factions and intrigue. Hope this story gets its recognition and support it deserves, good luck Author.
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Review written by the translator, I'm not fluent in English. I'm on chapter 101 and, so far, the story in general is GOOD and well written, apart from some personal criticisms, the only problem I sometimes see is the lack of fluidity in the story, one moment the chapter is about Alpheo and the next we are in the land of the North with the First Prince. Other than that, the story and especially Alpheo is being very well developed. The world hasn't exactly been underdeveloped so far, but I think the author will address that in the future. 5 stars. Keep up the great work and good luck with the history, author!
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Story is excellent I love reading it, however there are a decent amount of spelling and grammar mistakes but it is not so bad that it is story breaking. Most are minor and my brain automatically corrects it while reading but the grammar could definitely be better. All in all amazing novel and great read :)
the mc and side characters are well fleshed out the diffrent povs for other rulers or important side characters are my only dislike since I want more on how Alpheo will grow.If you enjoy an overall broader perspective of the world building happening through other important semi main characters povs you'll enjoy it a lot.the way they describe warfare is realistic and unique honestly peak beginning the developments currently are great 8/10 if we go by an unbiased opinion 10/10 since its been a long time since I've seen a novel in this genre be depicted with the mc actually doing what rulers would do etc instead of going pokemon catching for the women and turning it more into a harem story.
The story is enjoyable to read hope you continue on this beautiful book but please post the map or the chapter that’s hidden in. Great work keep it up.
Hey guys, shameless author is here! This is my last work , which I hope it will go well. The starting chapters will be about defining the worl-building of the novel, also the work will follow many stories even though the main one will be of the mc. I hope that you will like it , as I believe it will be my best one