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Reincarnate in Marvel as Peter Parker.
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I was also given for making a Spiderman fanfic, it's always great.
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It's my first novel, so maybe I get a bit confused, as well as the grammar.
the image is not mine, if you want to change it let me know.
I don't own any personage, they all belong to Marvel.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionIt wouldn't be webnovel if it wasn't shameless enough to put 5 stars on it. Thank you for reading. Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
like this fanfic, please, the author does not give up this novel. Felicia (Black Cat) and Gwen will be in the harem? Hope so. And no Yuri and lesbians please!
As the introduction had finished, I suppose that a review is in order. The grammar part while not perfect is completely redeable, supposing no problem at all, eapwcially rakin into account that nowadays the author is writing with a phone (This review is also phone written) The two main characters of now had refined personalities and a growth and development could be seen to appear and I pray that it would continue like that, not becoming pure estereotips. I specially really liked the dark touches of the novel moving away from the typical go lucky MC. And while it's clearly that it would be an harem, I really liked the interaction between Peter and Valeria, not the simple fall in love because he is the MC. Continue good work with the relationship's development. And while I'm not a big fan of marvel, never going over watching the movies, I really like the use of new characters outside of the usual ones. Keep the good work. I'm looking forward for new chapters and thanks for your hard work.
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At first I thought it would be just another fanfic with a bad storyline, but I was surprised by the story, even though I wasn't an avid fan of the franchise, I got really attached to the characters, especially Mc. I hope you continue the story to the end. 😊✌️
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I adore the cover art. The concept. The pacing. I simply can't read and comprehend majority of what the author is trying to convey every sentence. Not only is the words being used not clear English, the actions being taken are not understandable, the settings aren't even explained. All i can truly suggest is hire or find a translator to have this taken from the original language it was written in and put it in English.
Meh. Grammar is pretty bad so far, not to mention the story being kinda hard to follow. Not the worst, just not the best............................................
author, please hareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love your story sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
love your story. Hope you are feeling well. This is a new type of reincarnation that I have not seen before. The devil reincarnating someone.
Me encata la historia, 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🙂😁😁😁😁😁😁🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😁🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤣😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤨🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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first thank you for not doing that of the 15 thousand words, and you already have my support. I also have to say that the Spiderman fic became fashionable, but there are never enough, so there is no problem. You have my support and I'm waiting for more chapters.