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#Synopsis:
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In the far future the planet earth is full, and thanks to 3 key technologies, genetic manipulation, cryosleep, and advanced space engines, humanity builds deep space spaceships and launch themselves to the unknown confines of space to forge a new future away from home.
Follow our young engineer Erik as he starts on his first job at the young age of 60 years old in future earth where humans will live hundreds of years, he will reach an unknown place with his spaceship by accident and to survive he will have no choice but to explore alien structures and hunt dangerous monsters to get stronger, making alliances with the locals in more than friendly terms sometimes.
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The protagonist is a young 60 years old "young" engineer, he's easy-going and a good guy, he's been trained so he will know what he's doing most of the time, in "Chapter 1 - A New Beginning" he will explain more, as a human from the future where bodies are just flesh containers, he's fairly openminded (kinda like "Altered Carbon" from Netflix, but different, you can go one day to a genetic center, pay, and get inside a liquid tank and then, the next time you open your eyes your body has already changed, then you get your ticket and go home just like that, but combat modifications would be regulated).
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Hi, NirvanaPenguin here, suggestions on the story are welcome, this is a book I'm gonna write for fun and to get better at writing in preparation for a story I will start next year.
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A quick heads-up about the tags:
tags: FirstContact, alien, mystery, technology, AI, DesignedIntelligence, Waterworld, ARK, cooking, hunting, gathering, KingdomBuilding, alliances, leviathan, genetics, FromWeakToStrong, AlienReproduction, lewd, r18, genderswap, Futanari, HappySex, genetics, teaching, mechanics, FuturisticTechnologies, weakToStrong, cautiousProtagonist.
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Dialog Settings:
'...' --> mental dialog
"..." --> out loud dialog
[...] --> voice inside his head
but it will be clear during the book, the story might be slow for some, but i didn't wanna do a "10 years later" kinda crap and then strong to go explore, but he will slowly get there.

The book cover was drawn by myself(not the background though), I will try to make or pay someone to make a cooler one in the future though.

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Spoiler?:
Inspiration for the octopeople.
- Asari from Mass Effect.
- sea horses.
- subnautica all beings reproduce that way.

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NirvanaPenguin

Well, im gonna obviously give myself 5 stars, as commented you can tell me things about the book on the discord server, or just commenting on this comment.

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3yr
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Lightninin

Really nice and unique take on world exploration, base and army building and lots of lewds. Instead of the traditional fantasy world with Elves, Dwarves, Goblins, Etc... it is focused on an underwater world were so far, every inch of the surface is covered in water. A really nice take on evolution and modifications to enhance the main character over time instead of cheats, levels and skills. Overall a really nice read.

3yr
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JewelsGatherer

यह किताब बहुत बढ़िया बहुत ही दिलचस्प जिस मैं एलियंस के बारे मैं लिखा है और इसमें एलियंस के सेक्सी दृश्य जिसे पढ़ने से बहुत अच्छा लगता है. ( . Y . ) ( . Y . ) ( . Y . ) ( . Y . ) ( . Y . )

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3yr
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Maizena1

Dear author. I want to thank you for this story. I really like the underwater universe that gives more freedom in writing (I like subnautica too, maybe it's his...) Thank you author and GIVE ME MORE PLS.

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3yr
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readerproof2322

The story is great, i just saw it go from 99 to 109 episodes in one day. I think the story would in many places benefit from more detail, since it's about conveying an already existing thought world to readers. So then when i only find out important details after half an episode i'm gonna have to retcon my version of the fantasy world because i only found those things out later. Otherwise this is great because of the frequent updates and i after 2 days of reading am now at chapter 90 will start to proofread because i want to be of use. I already get this story for free so i'm gonna give back what i can. What astounded me though was the enormous amount of people who supposedly read the story already, about 400 thousand at this instant, compared to the amount of reader participation. The only problem i have with the story sometimes is that the links are basically useless by themselves since they can't be copied and the embeds on a comment on that link's paragraph stopped at some point in the story.

3yr
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Lucas_Torp

Hi so i just wanted to say that i think this novel is amazing i have never seen or heard about anything like this before and i do really enjoy it just wanted to let you know that your story really fascinates me and i look forward to the upcoming chapter's 🙂

3yr
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Man_of_culture

A very interesting story with exceptional telling. All the bio and physic explanations and ideas are fantastic as I love those parts in stories. A little bit too kinky but otherwise nice. Can´t wait to read more.

3yr
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Tented_Wings

One of the best on all of Webnovel but I always wish more chapters get released faster.

2yr
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Leinar32

The moment it says altered carbon.. I'm already sold... 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣

2yr
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DanY47

It's an okay novel to read.. 🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🤣🖖

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3yr
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wcpwnsuto

A great story so far with many ideas that I haven't read about in any other novel I have read on this site. The Author is also really active and often time uses links to images or videos to show what he is describing or talking about.(not that the author's descriptions are not good enough, they definitely are) The pacing of the story and the characters are quite interesting and alien. So you don't have all intelligent life in this novel thinking like a human which is nice and a good change of pace.

3yr
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ero_kitty

please don't drop this book i finally find some who shares a view of a world i like. the story is great the Grammer is good and there plot is awesome. keep up the fantastic book and I look forward to all the u write.[img=recommend]

3yr
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ero_kitty

I admit I loved this from the first chapter. [img=update] I will follow this book too its completion and hope it. ever ends. well thought out and executed. no overly late info dumps. and I've your discriptiveness. keep up the good work.

3yr
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mister_ofox

WATER IS THE WAY TO GO BOYYYYYYY! I HAVE BOTHING ELSE TO SAY but I'm running out of energy now so mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

3yr
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Raul_Andres_Ortiz

Love the story and development about it also I would like to know if your going to do another novel like this one but in a different environment

2yr
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Error_matrixking

i dont know why but i get the impression that this has inspiration from Subnautica .

2yr
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Zdailey15

Absolutely Love It

3yr
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Franda_cz

This novel feels like some teen wrote it after watching 18+ video. It would be fine if 18+ chapters were like 1 in ten chapters not every 2 Ps(english is not my main language)

4mth
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