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Soldier Zero
3.21 (98 Bewertungen)
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A Soldier dies and appears in front of our favorite Godking Shura who sends him as recompensation to a Marvel Universe with some powers and his favorite symbiont who he modified a little.
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NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!! MC'S GIRLFRIEND GOES AROUND SCREWING OTHER PEOPLE!!
New rating after the first one. The author doesn’t listen to his readers and let’s the MC get NTR lol and then out of nowhere instead of him beating the sh*t/killing the person who cheated on him without Felicia but OUT OF NOWHERE says that she is “brainwashed” or “lost her memories” so if you like your MC to get NTRed then by all means read this novel from an author that doesn’t listen to his readers lol it’s pathetic
NTR. at least warn people that there is going to be ntr later in the story and then you try and save your her ass by saying her memory’s are sealed, nah fam, I’m good. *proceeds to kill her*.
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I tried to keep reading i really did but this story as a whole have pratically everything i don't like in a story 1 - The original mc that suffered his whole life and got the chance of being reincarnated had to merge with the guy who lived a happy life for 16 years in the body that should be his. When they "Merged" in my opinion was the happy guy receiving the memories of the one who suffered instead of the other way around, it doesn't matter if you say they were always the same in my mind it happened that way. 2- The ntr, really i just waited and continued reading to see how this would unfold, i thought it was a way of you including diana as a love interest after felicia and him got together again but as of the latest chapter i saw you actualy plan on getting diana together with captain america, this was the chapter that made me stop reading, captain america getting together with the one who ntred the mc lol. 3- The way the mc had his revenge, first he gets mad she betrayed him with diana then as revenge you had him make diana and felicia have sex again, are you for real? you make all that drama over felicia betraying him and how he would get his revenge and you make then have sex again? I should have stopped reading here but i continued. 4- The way things are going with more dc characters planning on moving to the marvel universe there's a real chance of you just merging both universes together and i don't ever plan to read one of those. My soul wants to just rate this fanfic at 1 star, but my conscience prevented that, as i won't give a fanfic 1 star just because it has ntr in it like the others, but in this case i really wanted. Btw i rated Story Development as 1 star because the story went from a fanfic i originally rated 5 stars to this, instead of it getting better as it goes, after the ntr this story went downhill really fast. I'm brazilian in case of grammar nazis.
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All in all not really outstanding but nontheless a good read. I like the world building and Shura adds a lot of different types of Gods and cultures. His love interest tho is one of the parts in the story im not too sure i like. Well first she is a Damsel in distress that needs to be rescued. She got 'abducted' or thrown? not sure wich word is more fitting into the DC verse and the first thing she does is cheat on the MC with Wonder Woman. She did state that she was Bi, but still. Her cheating on him so quickly does leave a bad taste in my mouth and i hope hes not just gonna ignore it or even support it. NTR is always a bad sign in a relationship and i dont think many people could live with it.
Ok so it was going pretty good and then the author did something he had the love interest of the protagonist cheat on him, when he got hate for it and people wanting protagonist to dump the ho he decided to instead make it to where she cheated because her memories were sealed... yea no, other than that it was ok but im dropping it now.
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NTR is over with me, I don't know if I'll keep reading this ... Maybe I will read a little more to see how the author will deal with this situation, but this NTR was very random. I think it leaves anyone with a bad taste in their mouth and my heart is too weak for that.
I wish you can leave a rating without writing a review. Writing Quality - The writing feels janky and doesn't have the flow that immerses you in the reading. Everything being in present tense and the dialogue not spaced out doesn't do it any good either. (Sentences feel bland, a mixture of shorter and longer sentences along with more vocabulary will help. Also, space out the dialogue, it's hard to keep up with who's talking if it's all jumbled together. Stability of updates - Meh, author posted daily so far. Story Development - Rating this part on where I left off and I would have to say it didn't hook me in. I'll maybe come back when it has more chapters. Character Design - Same characters from the marvel universe and the main character feels bland/generic. Though, I can't really say much about the MC in future chapters, but it doesn't really look so great. He only awakens his memories when he's Sixteen and apparently there are two minds in one body now. The not so reincarnated dude and the other mind that's been in 'his' body the past 16 years. World background - It's marvel. Can't really give credit to the author on this one.
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The hell wrong with you author, do you have a NTR fetish and what the hell kind if punishment was that, the MC should just leave her, making it turn that she lost her memories is a valid reason for cheating is stupid and even worse you're bringing them back together like nothing really happened and you want diana to be with steve rogers after she NTR MC, might as well let her fall for him and then make it that some god ther turn peggy to her youth so steve ditch diana and go back to her, that will good enough punishment for her and for felicia just dump her.......... currently you are ruining the story yourself
The story has mediocre grammar and the story is also pretty damn bad, mc personality is pretty **** too and the worst part of the story is that it has plenty of ntr First at ch21 and then later on again, it's like author has a fetish for it, so warning for that
There are two people in one body so it's not a reincarnation since the author seems to not understand the term reincarnation. There is also ntr which nearly everyone basically hates so this novel is below a one star rating. I could go on about the faults in this rubbish fanfiction but I don't have the energy right now to go on. There is one emoji to describe this novel and this is 💩
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I don't see much problem in the NTR of this novel because the wife of the MC fucking another woman and not a man, anyway the MC has two wives and sometime they would have ***, harem is something all degenerate in itself I don't understand why only the MC should take advantage of this and his wives don't
He is slave in making. Why because asura say so he do it and asura make it clear when he order him to fairy tail chapter. In there he say it like obey or does so ya he is slae in making
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Man the story is all over the place,it seems like the Mc can't even decide on what he what's to do ,his idea of getting revenge on his significant other who cheated on him is to make her cheat again, I mean what's with that ,if she cheated just leave her and be done with it and the pitiful excuse the author gave of him getting ntr, apperanty her memory was wiped out.To me it was just totally unnecessary. It was just needless in my view
I was forced to review again seeing the rating of the story going downhill like that. I mean come on, there are many worse stories with good rating but a gem like this is getting such bad reviews... I am like is this fanfic being targeted? or are the original readers not reviewing it..... The NTR problem is already solved, if you want to read it then give it a try and don't just always believe ratings.....
This is because my last review was 4 stars. I'm petty like that. The whole cheating situation was handled so poorly, I couldn't even have done worse if I tried. Jack is cuck. Author has an NTR fetish. The Earth is flat. Amen.
Just a warning to any future readers; it's got pretty bad NTR. If you can ignore the NTR and the shaky grammar (especially the dialogue), you've got yourself a pretty good read. Author I suggest you don't put back and forth dialogue in a single paragraph and you need to work on portraying emotions too. All the dialogue just seems super flat. Unfortunately my heart is too weak for this NTR so I'm out but good luck.