Side Character with cheats (si Tenten)

LV 5

Kirito_Kirigaia

The fan fiction was good but don't waste your time here Multiple reincarnators. One of the rules of reincarnation was broken

LV 2

Celleborn

Please write a synopsis! Why should anyone put time to read a story to knowing what is it about? If is not worth your time tell me what the story is about, is not worth my time to read the story.

LV 1

Guionista

I'm not someone who gives bad reviews very often, but in this story, there's something that disgusted me as much as NTR stories, and that's the death of Naruto's consciousness when a transmigrated individual took over his consciousness (it's clear that the otaku dominates, and Naruto disappeared forever), and honestly, I wouldn't give a bad review just for that (if the MC weren't friends with Naruto, I wouldn't care), but the MC's reaction disgusted me because she was Naruto's friend and she didn't care that someone killed him (I mean, killed his consciousness by consuming it), she doesn't react, and she starts talking as if nothing happened, mentioning that he is also a transmigrated individual. The two talk as if he hadn't consumed Naruto. Also, she nerfs the MC (his abilities are overpowered in the long run, although I haven't read all the chapters and maybe it improves later, so don't be swayed too much by this). Furthermore, the author gives the one who transmigrates into Naruto a mind control ability (it's a sexual aura that causes arousal and attraction). The story was promising, but after reading that, it disgusted me. Perhaps if someone doesn't mind, they can still read it (there are also multiple reincarnated individuals, but I don't dislike that as it makes many interesting stories, but transmigrating into Naruto and how it unfolds causes only disgust and rejection of the MC)

LV 5

ShadowMonarch21

Give stars for not being another yuri, good plot, somewhat realistic mc, etc.

LV 1

Ziztod

Too many 3rd pov, increase interaction between characters so the story isn't too bland................,.............................................

LV 1

TIFOEL

Смог дочитать только до 9 главы. Развитие событий плохое. Вся идея попаданца в том что бы он был главным героем. Если вы развиваете персонаж, а потом внезапно добавляете еще одного, у которого КРУЧЕ способности, просто потому что! Это делает всю историю плохой. если вы добавили это только для лимонов то идея плоха. Этот чит должен был быть у Тен тен, тогда и секс со случайными мальчиками было бы приемлемым, раз уж вы так позиционируете своего персонажа, но то как движется история меня напрягло. Наруто и так супер сильный без дополнительных сил... И делать фанфик про второстепенного персонажа круто, но зачем этот поворот сюжета...эх...

LV 14

Queen_Karina

If you can get over the hurdle of there being 2 transmigrators (mc/tenten, naruto/love interest) then the story is nice for a while. That’s until the mc/tenten gets nerfed/poisoned and from what I see she hides it from naruto and everyone for a long time, it happens around chapter 53-54 and it still hasn’t been resolved. I personally can’t read a nerf like this that doesn’t get resolved quickly. Author has commented saying it’s for “character development” Ontop of that the author has been heavily hinting that the mc will die in the future, I have no problem with that, but the problem I have is that the mc just accepts it and doesn’t care that she is going to die in the future. She doesn’t want to fight for survival. I still recommend reading the first 50 chapters though since this is one of the rare fem mc fanfics who isn’t yuri

LV 14

Defective_Angel

yup, once the most taboo this was done, I decided to leave. another Isekai-ed person beside the MC and top of that, that person took over naruto body, have informations about naruto and have same cheats as mc, and his karma value seems pretty low. 5 stars is for everything but that

LV 1

Gaming_Mobile_9757

I've read a lot of Naruto and reincarnation fanfiction and I can say that you truly made something beautiful and powerful out of the events, unlike the rest of these idiots who all they do is make the heroes strong.

LV 6

icyfox

it's a great use of characters to make a unique mix

LV 4

SolaceViolet

tbh, I didn't really like how you made tenten your typical OC with too much OPness. It could have been an OC and I would have read it more.

LV 4

Anmortis

To be honest, I almost gave up on the story in the first few chapters because there was more than one reincarnated person.However, I wanted to give it a chance and saw that it wasn't as bad as I thought.For beginners, if you ignore the first chapters (those parts that may cause you to quit the story) and continue reading, I think you will love the story.

LV 4

Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 4

DaddyCarvz

this author is sick in the brain... this author is sick in the brain... this author is sick in the brain...

LV 1

Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. I like that MC become Tenten (it's rare to see someone reincarnate to Tenten) and she also so strong with weapon, and also genius in fuinjutsu (her shambles seal and re:seal is awesome).. I like that she's not op.. But, why you should add another reincarnate author san? He even reincarnate as Naruto, and have all his past memories.. Although I don't mind, but I never saw 2 reincarnate in any story so far (so let's see if this will make this story more interesting).. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍

LV 4

LRP115

Is it a yuri?